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I will developmental edit your dark fantasy romance, romantasy novel
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Hello there, I know how much time, heart, and soul you pour into your manuscript , it’s a big deal, and it deserves to be treated with real care before it reaches your readers.
I’m not here to rewrite...
About this Gig
Your romantasy may have a captivating world and an irresistible love story, but rushed romance, weak pacing, or underdeveloped characters can pull readers out of the story.
I provide professional developmental editing for romance, fantasy romance, and romantasy novels, focusing on the story beneath the sentences.
I will carefully assess your manuscript to identify what's working, what needs strengthening, and how to make your story more compelling while preserving your unique voice and creative vision.
What I review:
- Romance arc & character chemistry
- Plot structure & pacing
- Character development & motivations
- Emotional tension & stakes
- Fantasy world-building & consistency
- Chapter flow & scene transitions
- Dialogue & point of view
- Plot holes, repetition & inconsistencies
- Reader engagement
You'll receive thoughtful editorial feedback and practical suggestions you can use during revision.
Whether you're writing enemies-to-lovers, slow burn, forbidden romance, dark romantasy, paranormal romance, or another fantasy romance trope, I'll help you strengthen the story.
Message me before ordering so I can review your project and recommend the right package.
Language:
English
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French
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Italian
Genre:
Adventure
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Fanfiction
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Romance
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Science fiction
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Fantasy
Audience :
General readers
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Adult
POV:
First person
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Second person
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Third person limited
Complexity level:
Simple / easy read
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Intermediate
Voice:
Active
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What does your developmental editing include?
I’ll evaluate your plot, pacing, romance arc, character development, emotional tension, dialogue, POV, world-building, chapter flow, and overall reader experience, with clear feedback and practical revision suggestions.
Do you edit romance and romantasy specifically?
Yes. I work with romance, fantasy romance, and romantasy, including tropes such as enemies-to-lovers, slow burn, forbidden romance, and dark romance.
Will you rewrite my novel?
No. I’ll provide professional feedback and suggestions while preserving your writing style, voice, and creative vision. You remain in control of the story.
Do you review fantasy world-building?
Yes. I’ll look for gaps, inconsistencies, unclear rules, weak integration, and areas where the world-building may be affecting the story or reader experience.
