I will heavily edit your medical school, residency, or fellowship personal statement
Gig Summary
Strategic editing that strengthens voice, clarity, and structure
Vetted by Fiverr Pro
Elizabeth Doyle was selected by the Fiverr Pro team for their expertise.
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Proofreading & Editing
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What people loved about this freelancer
cindyosei

United States
Elizabeth was incredibly thoughtful and strategic in how she approached my residency personal statement. She did much more than line-editing. She identified...
florianaeu

United States
Elizabeth did an impressive job revising my medical school personal statement, and it's far stronger than what I sent her. She found the best evidence and experiences...
rutvij31

United States
Dr Doyle did a fantastic job making my AI looking draft to make it more humane. She also did research to write and edit the statement. The language she has...
arrowb

United States
Elizabeth did an amazing job once again! This is my fourth time working with her, and I honestly wouldn’t keep coming back if I wasn’t so happy with her work....
barkharanithaku

United States
Elizabeth edited my ERAS personal statement for family medicine. She sharpened the structure cut the padding and kept it sounding like me . Highly recommended her to IMG applicants.
About this Gig
Vetted Pro
If you're applying to medical school, residency, fellowship, dentistry, physician assistant, nursing, or veterinary programs, you need more than a polished draft. You need a personal statement that makes a clear, compelling case for your candidacy.
I provide strategic, substantive editing informed by 10+ years on university admissions committees, a PhD in Medical Ethics & Health Policy, and 26 years of professional editing experience. I've helped thousands of applicants get into competitive programs. My broader work includes writing multimillion-dollar clinical proposals and contributing to Canada's national dementia strategy.
My editing focuses on:
- Admissions strategy & positioning
- Structural/developmental editing
- Substantive rewriting
- Narrative rebuilding
- Identifying & elevating your strongest assets
- Removing clichés, generic/AI-generated language, and fluff
- Clarity, flow, & impact
I go far beyond proofreading. I'll restructure and rewrite while ensuring an authentic voice and using your concrete experiences to restore specificity and substance.
What I need: Your draft, application prompt/instructions, and current CV. Your draft doesn't need to be polished; that's my job.
Language:
English
Content type:
Personal statement
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Essay
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do you offer Zoom or phone consultations?
I don't offer calls. I protect my time for the strategic analysis, restructuring, and rewriting that directly improve your application. This also allows me to keep my rates affordable. Please send any context or questions through Fiverr messages.
Will you rewrite my entire essay?
I don't provide light proofreading. My role is to identify the strongest admissions strategy and revise accordingly, even when that means substantial changes to structure, content, or emphasis.
Do I (the customer) have full rights to this content?
Yes. After I complete the edits, you can alter it, attribute it to yourself (or your co-authors), and publish it.
Do you offer discounts?
No. Reducing the price would be sub-optimal for us both. It would cause me to expedite my work (to make up for my time/skill level) and I would end up delivering you a product that’s not to my standard. I’m a perfectionist, so my prices reflect the time it takes to give you the best product.
Can you rewrite my content so that it passes AI-detectors?
With my edits, your content will certainly sound more human, but I can't guarantee that it won't be marked as AI-generated in detection tools. That's because they are still relatively new and aren't 100% foolproof.
What makes you different from other editors?
I’ve sat on admissions committees for 10+ years, hold a PhD in medical ethics, and have helped thousands of applicants succeed. I bring editorial precision and insider strategy to every draft.
Do you edit CASPer or secondaries?
Yes. I work on secondaries, supplemental essays, and interview responses (including CASPer-style prep). Message me with your documents and I’ll create a custom offer.
Do you work with IMGs and international applicants?
Absolutely. I’ve helped hundreds of IMGs and international applicants gain entry into North American and UK-based programs, including competitive residency matches.
Can you edit my CV or resume too?
Yes. If you’d like CV editing bundled with your personal statement, let me know. I offer custom packages for applicants with multiple materials.
What is the included revision for?
I deliver a submission-ready rewrite. The included revision is for factual corrections, misunderstandings of your intended meaning, or limited targeted refinements. It's not meant to be used for a second full rewrite, new strategy, or open-ended collaborative drafting process.
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C cindyosei

United States
Elizabeth was incredibly thoughtful and strategic in how she approached my residency personal statement. She did much more than line-editing. She identified the strongest parts of my draft, rebuilt the structure around them, and explained the reasoning behind her choices. I especially appreciated how...
$200-$400
Price
2 days
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?F florianaeu

United States
Elizabeth did an impressive job revising my medical school personal statement, and it's far stronger than what I sent her. She found the best evidence and experiences from my CV, restructured the essay around it, and explained every change. Worth it!
$200-$400
Price
3 days
Duration
E 
Seller's Response
Helpful?R rutvij31

United States
Dr Doyle did a fantastic job making my AI looking draft to make it more humane. She also did research to write and edit the statement. The language she has written has flow and easy to understand. She even put comments in the draft why she wrote that way and explained to me also. No words!!!
$200-$400
Price
9 days
Duration
E 
Seller's Response
Helpful?A 
arrowb

United States
Ongoing collaborationElizabeth did an amazing job once again! This is my fourth time working with her, and I honestly wouldn’t keep coming back if I wasn’t so happy with her work. She took a personal statement and really helped elevate it while still keeping it true to the voice it was written in. I always appreciate how...
$600-$800
Price
9 days
Duration
E 
Seller's Response
Helpful?B barkharanithaku

United States
Elizabeth edited my ERAS personal statement for family medicine. She sharpened the structure cut the padding and kept it sounding like me . Highly recommended her to IMG applicants.
$200-$400
Price
6 days
Duration
E 
Seller's Response
Helpful?
1,869 reviews for this Gig
| (1,852) | ||
| (13) | ||
| (2) | ||
| (1) | ||
| (1) |
Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
C cindyosei

United States
Elizabeth was incredibly thoughtful and strategic in how she approached my residency personal statement. She did much more than line-editing. She identified the strongest parts of my draft, rebuilt the structure around them, and explained the reasoning behind her choices. I especially appreciated how...
$200-$400
Price
2 days
Duration
E 
Seller's Response
Helpful?F florianaeu

United States
Elizabeth did an impressive job revising my medical school personal statement, and it's far stronger than what I sent her. She found the best evidence and experiences from my CV, restructured the essay around it, and explained every change. Worth it!
$200-$400
Price
3 days
Duration
E 
Seller's Response
Helpful?R rutvij31

United States
Dr Doyle did a fantastic job making my AI looking draft to make it more humane. She also did research to write and edit the statement. The language she has written has flow and easy to understand. She even put comments in the draft why she wrote that way and explained to me also. No words!!!
$200-$400
Price
9 days
Duration
E 
Seller's Response
Helpful?A 
arrowb

United States
Ongoing collaborationElizabeth did an amazing job once again! This is my fourth time working with her, and I honestly wouldn’t keep coming back if I wasn’t so happy with her work. She took a personal statement and really helped elevate it while still keeping it true to the voice it was written in. I always appreciate how...
$600-$800
Price
9 days
Duration
E 
Seller's Response
Helpful?B barkharanithaku

United States
Elizabeth edited my ERAS personal statement for family medicine. She sharpened the structure cut the padding and kept it sounding like me . Highly recommended her to IMG applicants.
$200-$400
Price
6 days
Duration
E 
Seller's Response
Helpful?
