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I will read and comment any writings
Seduction starts with a story, let me write yours!
Stories live in all of us — some are bold, some are intimate, some burn slow, and some hit fast and hard. My job? To take your story idea, no matter how rough or raw, and transform it into something u...
About this Gig
Hello,
Are you looking for honest feedback and suggestions on your writing?
I offer beta reading tailored to your needs, whether you are working on a novel, a short story, or just want a fresh perspective.
I have worked with writers from the US, France, Germany, Spain, and other English-speaking countries, so I'm comfortable with different styles and audiences.
What I offer:
Full Beta Reading: A complete read-through with detailed feedback on plot, characters, pacing, and tone.
Manuscript Critique: Deeper feedback with clear suggestions to improve your story.
Basic Feedback: Short, focused feedback with typo and grammar corrections.
Scene Help: If you are stuck on a specific scene, I can help write or rewrite it so it fits smoothly with the chapters around it.
Ready to improve your story? Send me your manuscript and lets get started.
Genre:
Adventure
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Fanfiction
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Mystery
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Romance
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Fantasy
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True crime
Language:
English
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French
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Do you give feedback on dialogue?
Yes, I can help improve how natural and clear your dialogue sounds, and whether it fits your characters.
Can you check pacing and story structure?
Yes, I point out slow or rushed sections and give feedback on overall story flow and structure.
Do you check character consistency?
Yes, I look at whether your characters behave, grow, and stay consistent throughout the story.
Can I get a first impression of my story?
Yes, I can read your work and share honest first impressions focused on readability and reader engagement.
Do you help with clarity in writing?
Yes, I highlight parts that may be confusing and suggest ways to make your story clearer for readers.
What if my story is written in other languages?
No problem at all. I work with stories written in French, German, and Spanish.
