I will critique your novel for plot, pacing, and character clarity

Are you unsure if your story is working?

Youve written the pagesbut something feels off. The pacing drags, the character doesnt fully land, or the story isnt as engaging as you expected. You can sense it, but you cant quite pinpoint why.

Thats where I come in.

Im a bestselling psychological suspense author with multiple novels published through a major Amazon imprint and a traditional international publisher. My work has reached the Amazon charts, and I bring that experience into every critique.

I provide professional, big-picture manuscript critiques focused on what actually determines whether a story works.

️ What I evaluate:

• Plot and structure (does the story hold together?)
• Pacing (where it slows down or rushes)
• Character clarity and development
• Voice and tone
• Reader engagement (where interest dropsand why)
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What youll receive:

• A clear, concise 12 page critique
• Specific strengths and weaknesses
• Direct, actionable suggestions to improve your manuscript
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This is ideal for:

• First drafts
• Writers preparing for revision
• Authors who feel something isnt working but cant identify the problem