I will do ebook developmental editing and structural story critique

Italy

I speak Italian, Spanish, English, French, German

Professional Book and eBook publishing expert, End to End solution

Welcome! I am Emiliano Ponzi, a dedicated book and eBook specialist offering end to end solution. whether you are the brainstorming phase, polishing a final manuscript or ready for visual design, I wo...
About this Gig

Is your manuscript stuck? A generic proofreader cannot fix a broken plot or flat characters. Your story needs structural engineering.


I specialize in fiction developmental editing for novels and ebooks. I focus exclusively on the big picture: pacing, character arcs, world-building, and logical plot holes.


What you will receive:

  • Comprehensive Editorial Letter: A detailed roadmap analyzing your narrative structure and character motivations.
  • In-Line Manuscript Comments: Direct, transparent feedback inside your Word document highlighting exactly where the story drags or loses tension.
  • Structural Fixes: Actionable steps to bridge logic gaps.


My specialty niches:


Thriller, Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Romance, and YA Fiction.

Stop querying agents or self-publishing with an unpolished draft. Let's transform your rough manuscript into a compelling, unputdownable book.


Please message me first with your word count and genre for a custom quote.


Language:

English

Genre:

Children’s books

Comic book

Education

History

Audience :

General readers

Children

Teen / young adult

Adult

POV:

First person

Second person

Third person limited

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

Intermediate

Advanced

Voice:

Active

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