I will do ebook developmental editing and structural story critique
Professional Book and eBook publishing expert, End to End solution
About this Gig
Is your manuscript stuck? A generic proofreader cannot fix a broken plot or flat characters. Your story needs structural engineering.
I specialize in fiction developmental editing for novels and ebooks. I focus exclusively on the big picture: pacing, character arcs, world-building, and logical plot holes.
What you will receive:
- Comprehensive Editorial Letter: A detailed roadmap analyzing your narrative structure and character motivations.
- In-Line Manuscript Comments: Direct, transparent feedback inside your Word document highlighting exactly where the story drags or loses tension.
- Structural Fixes: Actionable steps to bridge logic gaps.
My specialty niches:
Thriller, Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Romance, and YA Fiction.
Stop querying agents or self-publishing with an unpolished draft. Let's transform your rough manuscript into a compelling, unputdownable book.
Please message me first with your word count and genre for a custom quote.
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What is the difference between this and line editing?
Line editing fixes style and grammar. This service focuses on story structure, plot holes, pacing, and character development.
Do you accept non-fiction books?
No. I focus strictly on fiction and narrative ebooks to provide the deepest structural expertise possible.
What files do I need to send?Please
provide your manuscript as a Microsoft Word document (.docx) so I can use the Track Changes feature.

