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I will developmental edit your books first 3 chapters
Editor, Coach, SelfPublish, Fiction Nonfiction
I’m Ericka Sasha Baldwin, an American-Caribbean author, publisher, and legacy-builder with over $15k earned on Fiverr and years of helping writers transform their manuscripts into published books.
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About this Gig
Congratulations on getting your opening chapters drafted! If you're wondering whether your book's beginning has the power to hook agents, editors, and readers, this diagnostic is your answer. It's a strategic, big-picture review designed to give you clarity and an actionable plan to make your first pages shine.
What Your Diagnostic Includes:
- Deep-Dive Read: A thorough review of your first three chapters (up to 7,500 words).
- 2-3 Page Editorial Memo: A detailed report covering your book's premise, hook, pacing, character voice, and market fit.
- Prioritized Fix List: A clear, step-by-step checklist so you know exactly where to focus your revisions.
- Optional 20-Minute Strategy Call: To discuss my findings and brainstorm solutions together.
How It Works:
Simply provide your manuscript as a double-spaced, 12-point font .docx file. Your work is 100% confidential, and I am happy to sign an NDA upon request. One revision is included.
You have a powerful story to tell. Let's make sure it starts strong.
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FAQ
What is a "First 3 Chapters Diagnostic"?
It’s a high-level developmental review focused on your story’s hook, characters, pacing, and structure, not copyediting or grammar.
What exactly do I receive with this service?
A 2–3 page editorial memo, a prioritized list of fixes, and an optional 20-minute call to discuss feedback.
How long does it take to get my feedback?
You’ll receive your feedback and roadmap within 4 days.
What genres do you specialize in?
I work with self-help, fantasy, and suspense. Message me if you have a question about genres.
What are the next steps after this diagnostic?
Most authors revise with confidence or choose an in-depth diagnostic or edit for their full manuscript.
