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Eric is unavailable until May 31, 2026
“I’m unavailable, be back soon. If you want to work together, feel free to message me!”
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I will beta read any genre
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
Highly Responsive
Known for exceptionally quick replies
What people loved about this freelancer
tyleranthonyr
Canada
6 Stars. Eric truly hops into the pages of your book. He hangs around in the world, interacts with the cast, checks the foundation for cracks, then reports...
fjmordaunt
United Kingdom
Eric's report was excellent. He not only provided a very detailed report but also in-line comments on the MS and a style sheet. It was clear he'd read the MS very carefully. Superb!
fjmordaunt
United Kingdom
Eric looked looked over my entire manuscript and again produced a very detailed and comprehensive report on it. In addition, he followed up with further comments...
misskissel
United States
I recommend working with Eric. He exceeded expectations and had a fast turnaround. I would definitely work with him again.
About this Gig
Let me offer both a reader's and a writer's perspective on your work. I know how hard it can be to share your writing with others, so I make sure to provide honest and in-depth critiques that are constructive, not destructive.
My focuses are on:
- The Hook Does your first line grab me? Do the first few pages?
- Characterization including motivation, development, consistency, and interplay
- Dialogue For conciseness and flow
- Pacing Scene, chapter, and book level
- Setting, Atmosphere, and Worldbuilding Does the setting feel alive?
- Plot and Conflict Are there any plot holes or inconsistencies?
- Tone Does the tone ever feel at odds with the story?
- Prose Including grammar, sentence syntax, and vocabulary
I provide in-line comments, a reader report, and a style sheet, and am happy to answer any additional questionnaires you submit. I also perform light editing (spelling mistakes, confusing sentences, distracting repetition, etc.) but this is not an editing service and comes as noticed. I also offer alpha reading services.
My specialties are Sci-Fi/Fantasy, Crime, and Romance, but am willing take on any genre. Feel free to contact me with any questions.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do you take manuscripts over 200k words?
Sure, just message me for details.
Reviews
124 reviews for this Gig
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S shanebarry22
United States
Too many lol's written, it seemed a little too casual. Overall fine, I don't mind. Some good advice on what to improve and stuff about how characters pop in suddenly without introduction.
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?T tyleranthonyr
Canada
6 Stars. Eric truly hops into the pages of your book. He hangs around in the world, interacts with the cast, checks the foundation for cracks, then reports back with a reader report that is more entertaining than the novel itself. He tracks character motivation, plot structure, and worldbuilding consistency...
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?F fjmordaunt
Repeat Client
United Kingdom
Eric's report was excellent. He not only provided a very detailed report but also in-line comments on the MS and a style sheet. It was clear he'd read the MS very carefully. Superb!
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?F fjmordaunt
Repeat Client
United Kingdom
Eric looked looked over my entire manuscript and again produced a very detailed and comprehensive report on it. In addition, he followed up with further comments on queries and observations I made. A real pleasure to work with and I very much hope to do so again in the future.
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?M misskissel
United States
I recommend working with Eric. He exceeded expectations and had a fast turnaround. I would definitely work with him again.
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
124 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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Most relevant
S shanebarry22
United States
Too many lol's written, it seemed a little too casual. Overall fine, I don't mind. Some good advice on what to improve and stuff about how characters pop in suddenly without introduction.
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?T tyleranthonyr
Canada
6 Stars. Eric truly hops into the pages of your book. He hangs around in the world, interacts with the cast, checks the foundation for cracks, then reports back with a reader report that is more entertaining than the novel itself. He tracks character motivation, plot structure, and worldbuilding consistency...
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?F fjmordaunt
Repeat Client
United Kingdom
Eric's report was excellent. He not only provided a very detailed report but also in-line comments on the MS and a style sheet. It was clear he'd read the MS very carefully. Superb!
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?F fjmordaunt
Repeat Client
United Kingdom
Eric looked looked over my entire manuscript and again produced a very detailed and comprehensive report on it. In addition, he followed up with further comments on queries and observations I made. A real pleasure to work with and I very much hope to do so again in the future.
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?M misskissel
United States
I recommend working with Eric. He exceeded expectations and had a fast turnaround. I would definitely work with him again.
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?
