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I will beta read and provide detailed story feedback
About this Gig
Hi! I'm Eris, a narrative consultant and beta reader.
I help writers improve their stories through thoughtful, constructive, and supportive feedback. Whether you're working on a novel, a short story, or a narrative-driven game, I'll help you bring your story to the next level.
Longer Projects
For longer manuscripts, please contact me for a custom quote. Pricing depends on the length of your project.
My Process
I take time to provide thoughtful, in-depth feedback through multiple reading passes.
Delivery typically takes around two weeks.
After delivery, I typically include one follow-up round, for questions and clarifications on my feedback.
Lets work together!
Feel free to message me before ordering if you're unsure which option is best for your project.
Language:
English
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French
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do you work in other languages?
Yes. I offer feedback in both English and French.
Do you work on fanfictions, video games and visual novels?
Yes! I have experience with fanfiction as well as interactive narratives, including video games and visual novels. I’m comfortable analyzing branching stories, player choices, and narrative design.
What if I want feedback on a novel or a longer project?
For longer manuscripts, please contact me before ordering. I’ll provide a custom quote based on your word count and the type of feedback you’re looking for.
What kind of feedback will I receive?
You’ll receive a detailed report with clear feedback and practical advice. Depending on the package, this may include reader reactions, narrative analysis, and suggestions for revisions.
Will you edit or rewrite my text?
No. I focus on feedback and analysis, not rewriting. However, I may include sample line edits or suggestions to illustrate my points, depending on the package selected.
What genres do you work with?
I work with most fiction genres, including speculative fiction, romance, literary fiction. I specialize in fantasy. If you’re unsure, feel free to message me first.
Do you offer follow-up support?
Yes, I usually include one round of follow-up questions after delivery, so you can clarify any part of the feedback.
How detailed is your report?
My reports are in-depth, typically several pages long, depending on the length of your text and the package selected.
