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I will beta read litrpg, progression fantasy or isekai novel
About this Gig
Writing a LitRPG, progression fantasy or isekai novel? I'm a human beta reader who reads every page, never AI, and I'll tell you exactly where your story shines and where it drags.
You get honest, specific feedback on:
- Hook and opening chapters
- System, stats and power scaling consistency
- Pacing between fights, training and plot
- Character growth and motivation
- Plot holes and confusing moments
You also get a clear list of what to fix first.
WHAT YOU GET
- Basic: up to 10k words + report on hook and pacing
- Standard: up to 55k words + inline comments + reader report
- Premium: up to 100k words + inline comments + report with system and power-scaling check
Not sure which package fits your novel? Message me with your word count and any questions you want answered.
THANK YOU.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What types of stories do you beta read?
LitRPG, progression fantasy, isekai, GameLit and cultivation stories. Message me first if your story is a different type.
Is the feedback written by a real person?
Yes. I read every page myself and write the report by hand. No AI tools are used to read or review your story.
Will you check my system, stats and power scaling?
Yes. Premium includes a check for stat inconsistencies, power jumps that feel unearned, and rules that contradict each other.
Can you read a serial I'm still writing?
Yes. Send me the chapters you have, tell me what comes next, and I'll give feedback on where the story stands.
Will my manuscript stay private?
Yes. Your work stays confidential. I won't share or discuss it with anyone.
What if I'm not sure which package to choose?
Message me with your word count and what you want checked, and I'll point you to the right package.
