I will developmentally edit your novel
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About this Gig
I have over 10 years of writing experience. I am a US-based native English speaker.
I specialize in supporting writers through the revision process. You will not only have a cohesive, emotionally impactful story by the time you've gone through this edit, but you will be a better writer.
I focus on helping you create impactful stories through strong use of theme and in mentoring you through the revision process. Not only will I re-write sections to provide several examples of how to fix various issues, I will also help you understand the reasons behind those different approaches. In short, I'm the writing coach in your back pocket, here to answer questions and cheer you on!
Using in-line comments and an editorial letter, I will provide feedback on:
- Plot structure and inconsistencies
- Scene structure
- Scene redundancies and extraneous content
- Pacing; on both a plot and scene level
- Character arcs and development
- Theme
- Story cohesiveness
In short, I help you improve your novel on a big-picture and scene level.
I will not provide:
- Copyediting
- Proofreading
Every author needs someone on their side. Please message me so we can discuss your project. I look forward to working with you.
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FAQ
What is Developmental Editing, what is Structural Editing, and do you offer both?
Developmental Editing is an in-depth look at story concept, character arcs, and plot. In contrast, Structural Editing focuses on pacing, characters, setting, theme, and writing style. I will do both a developmental and structural edit on your book.
What should I include in my message to you?
Your word count, the level of editing you've already done on your book (have you had beta readers? Already hired an editor? Is this the first time your book has seen the light of day?), and whether you're planning to self publish or traditionally publish.
I need someone in my corner, but this is way outside my price range. What should I do?
Sounds like you need a manuscript evaluation. It's only one pass with more limited examples, but it provides much of the value for a fraction of the cost. Check out my manuscript evaluation gig here: https://www.fiverr.com/share/5kADb1
What happens if I have more questions?
My goal is to help you succeed, so I am always open to questions and discussions. Message me your questions and I will do my best to answer them quickly and completely. Remember, I'm like the writing coach in your back pocket - please send me all the questions!
What do you mean, you'll be the writing coach in my back pocket?
As you go through publishing process, you'll face struggles. Sometimes you get stuck on a revision, run out of motivation, or have a technical question. I'll be here to answer every one! Every author (especially self-pub authors) need an expert ready to help, guide, and motivate. I am yours!
What is an editorial letter?
An editorial letter is sometimes called a manuscript evaluation. This is a document which addresses the big-picture items of your manuscript like character arcs, pacing, theme, and narratives.
Do you consider my prologue my "first chapter" for a First Chapter edit?
If your prologue and your first chapter combined are under 3500 words, feel free to send them both. If they are too long when combined, then please only send your first chapter, not your prologue. This is because the prologue is an intro to the world, where a first chapter is an intro to the plot.
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D diane63
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Canada
Thank you so much for reviewing my chapter. You provided great feedback. Your notes were detailed and excellent. I am looking forward to working with you again.
$50-$100
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5 days
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Helpful?L leannamackellin

United States
She gave great feedback! I'm a beginner looking to improve my craft so I wrote a short story to have developmentally edited. This was a great way to learn! I received an in depth analysis on what my strengths were and actionable changes on how to improve my weaknesses. Overall, a great experience!
$50-$100
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7 days
Duration
Helpful?J 
jorgea1959
Repeat Client

United States
She was courteous and helpful, understanding how she could help. Her recommendations were valid and I could clearly understand how to make the adjustments to my story. I will call on her if I have any questions.
$1,000-$1,500
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?D diane63
Repeat Client

Canada
Thank you for the feedback. It was very helpful in moving forward with my project
$50-$100
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4 days
Duration
Helpful?S 
simperfi1957
Repeat Client

Dominican Republic
Did exactly as promised and got back to me very fast. I highly recommend her.
$1,500-$2,000
Price
2 weeks
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26 reviews for this Gig
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D diane63
Repeat Client

Canada
Thank you so much for reviewing my chapter. You provided great feedback. Your notes were detailed and excellent. I am looking forward to working with you again.
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?L leannamackellin

United States
She gave great feedback! I'm a beginner looking to improve my craft so I wrote a short story to have developmentally edited. This was a great way to learn! I received an in depth analysis on what my strengths were and actionable changes on how to improve my weaknesses. Overall, a great experience!
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?J 
jorgea1959
Repeat Client

United States
She was courteous and helpful, understanding how she could help. Her recommendations were valid and I could clearly understand how to make the adjustments to my story. I will call on her if I have any questions.
$1,000-$1,500
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?D diane63
Repeat Client

Canada
Thank you for the feedback. It was very helpful in moving forward with my project
$50-$100
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?S 
simperfi1957
Repeat Client

Dominican Republic
Did exactly as promised and got back to me very fast. I highly recommend her.
$1,500-$2,000
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
