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I will beta read your epic or dark fantasy novel and give detailed feedback
Gig Summary
Beta reader and book editor
Hi, I'm Ezekiel a beta reader. I'm a dedicated professional offering expert proofreading, beta reading, and writing services. I have work experience within a successful publishing house, where I was a...
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
What people loved about this freelancer
voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for looking over these chapters and examining what I've done Right and what I've done wrong. you're inside is actually helped point out where I need...
voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for going over this chapter and let me know that I need to do some lite fine tuning to get the last little bit of this to flow as it should for content...
voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for going over this chapter and let me know that I need to do some lite fine tuning to get the last little bit of this to flow as it should for content...
voicedbyshannon
United States
Thank you for pointing out the polish points of the chapters that need the most urgent work. That the material is good and that hearing that I need to do some...
voicedbyshannon
United States
the material looks excellent and flows well and lets me know that I need to do some subtle tweaks between the two sections between Olivia and the espionage...
About this Gig
Every book needs a fresh perspective before it reaches the world. That's where I come in a dedicated beta reader for Epic and Dark Fantasy, giving honest, clear feedback to improve your story without changing your voice.
Writers often get too close to their work. You might miss pacing issues, flat characters, or confusing scenes. A beta reader helps you see your story the way real readers will. As your beta reader, I point out what works, what feels off, and how to fix it.
What I Offer:
Thoughtful beta reader feedback for fantasy
Clear notes on plot, characters, and pacing
A beta reader view on dialogue and worldbuilding
Honest, simple suggestions you can apply fast
Problems I Help Solve:
Slow pacing I show where it drags
Flat characters I highlight missing depth
Confusing scenes I point them out clearly
Weak dialogue I guide you to improve it
Why Choose Me?
I read carefully as a real beta reader
My feedback is clear and useful
You get organized notes from a reliable beta reader
With the right beta reader, your story feels ready for readers.
Language:
Dutch
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English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Can you keep my work confidential?
Absolutely. Your manuscript is 100% safe and private with me. I treat every project with strict confidentiality and will never share, reuse, or disclose your work. Your trust matters, and protecting your story is my priority.
Will your feedback be critical or encouraging?
Both. I provide balanced, constructive feedback I’ll highlight what’s working well while also pointing out areas that need improvement. My goal is to strengthen your manuscript, not discourage you. You’ll walk away with clear insights and motivation to keep refining your story.
What kind of feedback will I receive?
You’ll get honest but constructive notes that highlight both strengths and weaknesses. Expect clear, actionable feedback on what’s immersive, what feels confusing, and how readers might respond — not just vague “I liked it” comments.
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V voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for looking over these chapters and examining what I've done Right and what I've done wrong. you're inside is actually helped point out where I need to break up some of these chapters into other chapters as well as get rid of the repetition that has flowed throughout but also you've pointed...
$200-$400
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?V voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for going over this chapter and let me know that I need to do some lite fine tuning to get the last little bit of this to flow as it should for content and information and world building and character building as well. thank you
$200-$400
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?V voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for going over this chapter and let me know that I need to do some lite fine tuning to get the last little bit of this to flow as it should for content and information and world building and character building as well. thank you
$200-$400
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?V voicedbyshannon
United States
Thank you for pointing out the polish points of the chapters that need the most urgent work. That the material is good and that hearing that I need to do some minor work to make this from to good to great. Thank you.
$200-$400
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?V voicedbyshannon
United States
the material looks excellent and flows well and lets me know that I need to do some subtle tweaks between the two sections between Olivia and the espionage section at the end that's accept the second book in the series. thank you
$200-$400
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
12 reviews for this Gig
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V voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for looking over these chapters and examining what I've done Right and what I've done wrong. you're inside is actually helped point out where I need to break up some of these chapters into other chapters as well as get rid of the repetition that has flowed throughout but also you've pointed...
$200-$400
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?V voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for going over this chapter and let me know that I need to do some lite fine tuning to get the last little bit of this to flow as it should for content and information and world building and character building as well. thank you
$200-$400
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?V voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for going over this chapter and let me know that I need to do some lite fine tuning to get the last little bit of this to flow as it should for content and information and world building and character building as well. thank you
$200-$400
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?V voicedbyshannon
United States
Thank you for pointing out the polish points of the chapters that need the most urgent work. That the material is good and that hearing that I need to do some minor work to make this from to good to great. Thank you.
$200-$400
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?V voicedbyshannon
United States
the material looks excellent and flows well and lets me know that I need to do some subtle tweaks between the two sections between Olivia and the espionage section at the end that's accept the second book in the series. thank you
$200-$400
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?
