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I will beta read your epic or dark fantasy novel and give detailed feedback
Beta reader and book editor
Hi, I'm Ezekiel a beta reader. I'm a dedicated professional offering expert proofreading, beta reading, and writing services. I have work experience within a successful publishing house, where I was a...
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Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
What people loved about this freelancer
voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for horning out information that I have got most of this chapter right. The stations that I need to improve on is character classification and world...
voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for reviewing these chapters and let me know what I need to improve and what I need to adjust to make these stories readable and adjust the put line...
voicedbyshannon
United States
thanks for looking over these chapters let me know what works well and why I've been doing right in the story and why I need to work. thank you
thesyver
Denmark
Asked for general feedback on my project, and the work done was exceptionel. small details highlighted that i never thought of, and great ideas to overcome issues. highly recommended
About this Gig
Every book needs a fresh perspective before it reaches the world. That's where I come in a dedicated beta reader for Epic and Dark Fantasy, giving honest, clear feedback to improve your story without changing your voice.
Writers often get too close to their work. You might miss pacing issues, flat characters, or confusing scenes. A beta reader helps you see your story the way real readers will. As your beta reader, I point out what works, what feels off, and how to fix it.
What I Offer:
Thoughtful beta reader feedback for fantasy
Clear notes on plot, characters, and pacing
A beta reader view on dialogue and worldbuilding
Honest, simple suggestions you can apply fast
Problems I Help Solve:
Slow pacing I show where it drags
Flat characters I highlight missing depth
Confusing scenes I point them out clearly
Weak dialogue I guide you to improve it
Why Choose Me?
I read carefully as a real beta reader
My feedback is clear and useful
You get organized notes from a reliable beta reader
With the right beta reader, your story feels ready for readers.
Language:
Dutch
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English
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FAQ
Can you keep my work confidential?
Absolutely. Your manuscript is 100% safe and private with me. I treat every project with strict confidentiality and will never share, reuse, or disclose your work. Your trust matters, and protecting your story is my priority.
Will your feedback be critical or encouraging?
Both. I provide balanced, constructive feedback I’ll highlight what’s working well while also pointing out areas that need improvement. My goal is to strengthen your manuscript, not discourage you. You’ll walk away with clear insights and motivation to keep refining your story.
What kind of feedback will I receive?
You’ll get honest but constructive notes that highlight both strengths and weaknesses. Expect clear, actionable feedback on what’s immersive, what feels confusing, and how readers might respond — not just vague “I liked it” comments.
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V voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for horning out information that I have got most of this chapter right. The stations that I need to improve on is character classification and world building as well as finishing up a conversation that happened at the end that got caught off. I will go through and make these revisions to help make the story flow better. thank you
$200-$400
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?V voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for reviewing these chapters and let me know what I need to improve and what I need to adjust to make these stories readable and adjust the put line and storyline along with the timeline of the novel to fit certain details and make them feel better. thank you
$200-$400
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?V voicedbyshannon
United States
thanks for looking over these chapters let me know what works well and why I've been doing right in the story and why I need to work. thank you
$100-$200
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?T thesyver
Denmark
Asked for general feedback on my project, and the work done was exceptionel. small details highlighted that i never thought of, and great ideas to overcome issues. highly recommended
$50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?V voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for looking over this chapter and let me know what works and what doesn't. thank you
$200-$400
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?
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7 reviews for this Gig
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V voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for horning out information that I have got most of this chapter right. The stations that I need to improve on is character classification and world building as well as finishing up a conversation that happened at the end that got caught off. I will go through and make these revisions to help make the story flow better. thank you
$200-$400
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?V voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for reviewing these chapters and let me know what I need to improve and what I need to adjust to make these stories readable and adjust the put line and storyline along with the timeline of the novel to fit certain details and make them feel better. thank you
$200-$400
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?V voicedbyshannon
United States
thanks for looking over these chapters let me know what works well and why I've been doing right in the story and why I need to work. thank you
$100-$200
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?T thesyver
Denmark
Asked for general feedback on my project, and the work done was exceptionel. small details highlighted that i never thought of, and great ideas to overcome issues. highly recommended
$50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?V voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for looking over this chapter and let me know what works and what doesn't. thank you
$200-$400
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?
