I will be the developmental editor for your novel or ebook
Gig Summary
Editor and Proofreader
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Phoenix R. was selected by the Fiverr Pro team for their expertise.
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Book Editing
Proofreading & Editing
Writing Advice
What people loved about this freelancer
mkinseyphd

United States
I was really blown away by Phoenix. He was incredibly professional from start to finish. Initially I was impressed by how he helped me figure out what I needed...
darcyarwen

United States
I am once again pleased with this seller. The feedback is on point and helps bring my story to a better level of readability and understanding. I highly recommend...
dallaskalman

Canada
Once again, Phoenix has outdone himself with his expert handling of children's literature. He has reaffirmed his deep understanding of the genre by attentively...
About this Gig
Vetted Pro
Hello!
My name is Phoenix Raig, a multiple-times nominated and award-winning editor and an Aurealis nominee. I've worked with independent authors, small publishing houses, and some clients with commercial contracts. I'm a co-founder of Precipice Fiction, a cohort of sci-fi and fantasy writers, and was one of six teachers for the Westwords Speculative Writing course, 2025 cohort, in Western Sydney.
I would love to be your developmental editor and help bring your literary project to its strongest point.
I can help with short stories and novellas all the way up to longer works.
If your book/ebook is longer than 40k, reach out for a custom order!
Video Calls:
Each dev edit over 20k words includes an optional 2-hour post-edit video call, allowing us to ensure everything is understood and you know your next steps. Additionally, I'll be further available for questions and assistance.
Ask about sample edits, formatting or any other questions you might have!
Do you have general writing questions? I co-host a writing podcast on this exact thing: "Prose and Cons". Available on all major podcast streaming platforms.
Language:
English
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Spanish
Audience :
General readers
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Teen / young adult
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Adult
POV:
First person
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Third person limited
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Multiple POVs
Complexity level:
Intermediate
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Advanced
Voice:
Other
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What is included in your Basic Package?
This is an editorial assessment, perfect for early drafting (around 60% through draft 1 or having just completed draft 1), when you're seeking early feedback and direction. Includes a detailed written assessment breaking the manuscript down across a number of key categories.
What is included in your Standard Package?
This is a standard developmental edit. Includes: - Section rewrite suggestions. - Structural rewrite suggestions. - A written literary assessment of the work. - An optional 2-hour post-edit video call (for projects 20k words or higher). Designed to help get your primary story beats in line.
What is included in your Premium Package?
We enter a bit of a manuscript mentorship. Includes everything from the Standard Package plus the following: - Feedback walkthrough (note-by-note Q&A). - Post-edit readthrough. - An additional 4 hours of call time (6 hours in total) to break up as we see fit. I'm along for the journey with you.
What software do you use for editing?
I use Google Docs for all of my editing. It's a free, easy-to-use piece of software that makes it simple to help clients across a large spectrum of software tools. Everyone has their favourite tool—I find Google Docs to be a good middle ground. If you have questions about this, please reach out.
Will my story be too different after working with you?
My aim is to help you tell YOUR story. I pride myself on my ability to transform a narrative while maintaining the voice of the author. Preserving your voice and the integrity of your story is the number one priority. I'll simply help you make the story clearer and more potent.
Why don't you offer an extra revision?
I'd love to offer an additional revision, but doing so would grow the prices quite a bit as it'd nearly double the work per order. The editor I worked with didn't include revisions either. However, after an order, we're available for any questions, ensuring next steps are clear and notes understood.
Am I limited to the word counts listed on the packages?
Nope! Those are just baselines. If your word count is different, reach out and I'll make you a custom offer.
You include Video Calls?
Video calls are an excellent tool for wrapping up a project. We can clear up remaining questions, talk about future plans, and build the editor-author relationship. These are included in the standard and premium packages for projects over 20k words and can be added for other projects as an extra.
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E emmalightmagic

Ireland
James Healy from Bent Light Writing edited my Children's book and I found him excellent. He helped clarify the little things that were niggling at the back of my mind and gave great suggestions. I found his observations were spot on and he helped me get more from my characters. I would definitely work with him again.
$1,000-$2,500
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?P puzzleheadpopup

Taiwan
As a first-time user on this platform, I was nervous about what to expect and what the results would be. Overall, I am very pleased, satisfied, and eager to continue! Phoenix took away my self-doubt and helped me see things I missed or hadn't considered in my work. It was a great experience, and I would...
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?E 
evankail366

United States
Well worth the money! Phoenix gave great insight on what needed to be done to publish my book and delivered in a quick and professional manner.
$400-$600
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?C cyncastle

United States
Ongoing collaborationWorking with Phoenix has been amazing. This was my first time receiving professional feedback for my picture book manuscript, so I was naturally nervous and didn't quite know what to expect. I received my first delivery today after working with him just last Friday, and I am thrilled with how the process...
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?R rmanooo

United States
Ongoing collaborationPhoenix has now worked on 12 of my short story manuscripts. There is a reason why I stick with him...He is the best! Thank you brother!
$600-$800
Price
8 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
28 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
E emmalightmagic

Ireland
James Healy from Bent Light Writing edited my Children's book and I found him excellent. He helped clarify the little things that were niggling at the back of my mind and gave great suggestions. I found his observations were spot on and he helped me get more from my characters. I would definitely work with him again.
$1,000-$2,500
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?P puzzleheadpopup

Taiwan
As a first-time user on this platform, I was nervous about what to expect and what the results would be. Overall, I am very pleased, satisfied, and eager to continue! Phoenix took away my self-doubt and helped me see things I missed or hadn't considered in my work. It was a great experience, and I would...
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?E 
evankail366

United States
Well worth the money! Phoenix gave great insight on what needed to be done to publish my book and delivered in a quick and professional manner.
$400-$600
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?C cyncastle

United States
Ongoing collaborationWorking with Phoenix has been amazing. This was my first time receiving professional feedback for my picture book manuscript, so I was naturally nervous and didn't quite know what to expect. I received my first delivery today after working with him just last Friday, and I am thrilled with how the process...
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?R rmanooo

United States
Ongoing collaborationPhoenix has now worked on 12 of my short story manuscripts. There is a reason why I stick with him...He is the best! Thank you brother!
$600-$800
Price
8 weeks
Duration
Helpful?

