I will be a beta reader for your novel
Professional Developmental Fiction Editor
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What people loved about this freelancer
nicomachea

Canada
Worth every penny. She traversed the work with relative ease and made sure to outline the issues that I had with the product. I can not state how well she...
mark_schuck

United States
I hired Fay as a beta-reader for my novel and she exceeded all of my expectations. Her report was very in-depth and broken down into easily managed sections....
cheyennea92

United States
Fay did a great job going through my writing and giving helpful feedback. I was really looking forward to someone giving me feedback that will help me improve my writing and that is exactly what Fay did!
tomuel121

Australia
Fay engaged with my novel and clearly put significant effort into conveying her advice in a way that best positions my novel and career for future success. That's what this was for, and Fay delivered.
About this Gig
Have you finished a novel?
Thats an amazing achievement in itself!
But dont just send it out blind, or get it edited and throw it up on Kindle. Get some feedback on the story and see how you might make it better. There are so many things that can make the difference between an okay story and one that grabs a reader and won't let them go.
Things like:
- Setups and payoffs
- Continuity
- Character relatability
- Tension
- Genre-specific tropes
I've also been a first or beta reader for fellow pros who write thrillers, mysteries, horror, fantasy, literary, and more.
Now, I'd love to be your first reader and help you develop your craft.
For lots of positive support and constructive criticism please get in touch. I know how challenging it can be to put your work in front of someone for the first time and I promise to treat you gently but honestly.
Genre:
Action
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Adventure
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Mystery
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Romance
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Science fiction
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Fantasy
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What about spelling and grammar?
I will look out for any issues and let you know what I pick up on.
Do you do discounts for second reads?
I do! get in touch when you are ready and I will send you a custom order.
What About Non-Fiction?
Nope, sorry. This isn't a service that I offer.
262 reviews for this Gig
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ellieonthemoon

Australia
Short But Sweet: Fay has helped improve my book. She won’t give you dishonest feedback - expect reality from her. Very impressed. The Positive: The response delivery time was fantastic, and I really appreciated how fast the manuscript was read. I was absolutely thrilled by the constructive criticism...
$200-$400
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?N nicomachea

Canada
Worth every penny. She traversed the work with relative ease and made sure to outline the issues that I had with the product. I can not state how well she did her job and at the pay for it. I would recommend for future work. However, patience, like with all things is advised.
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?M mark_schuck

United States
I hired Fay as a beta-reader for my novel and she exceeded all of my expectations. Her report was very in-depth and broken down into easily managed sections. She didn’t just focus on how to write the story better structurally, she also gave advice on how to make it more attractive to readers from page...
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?C cheyennea92

United States
Fay did a great job going through my writing and giving helpful feedback. I was really looking forward to someone giving me feedback that will help me improve my writing and that is exactly what Fay did!
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?T tomuel121

Australia
Fay engaged with my novel and clearly put significant effort into conveying her advice in a way that best positions my novel and career for future success. That's what this was for, and Fay delivered.
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?
262 reviews for this Gig
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| (17) | ||
| (3) | ||
| (1) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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ellieonthemoon

Australia
Short But Sweet: Fay has helped improve my book. She won’t give you dishonest feedback - expect reality from her. Very impressed. The Positive: The response delivery time was fantastic, and I really appreciated how fast the manuscript was read. I was absolutely thrilled by the constructive criticism...
$200-$400
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?N nicomachea

Canada
Worth every penny. She traversed the work with relative ease and made sure to outline the issues that I had with the product. I can not state how well she did her job and at the pay for it. I would recommend for future work. However, patience, like with all things is advised.
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?M mark_schuck

United States
I hired Fay as a beta-reader for my novel and she exceeded all of my expectations. Her report was very in-depth and broken down into easily managed sections. She didn’t just focus on how to write the story better structurally, she also gave advice on how to make it more attractive to readers from page...
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?C cheyennea92

United States
Fay did a great job going through my writing and giving helpful feedback. I was really looking forward to someone giving me feedback that will help me improve my writing and that is exactly what Fay did!
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?T tomuel121

Australia
Fay engaged with my novel and clearly put significant effort into conveying her advice in a way that best positions my novel and career for future success. That's what this was for, and Fay delivered.
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?

