I will provide line and developmental editing for your novel

5.0
5.0

United Kingdom

I speak English, Japanese

191 orders completed

Providing authors with a helping hand to polish their creative gems

Hi there! Stories are my life's passion, and since graduating from Durham University I have worked successfully with many authors, both published and aspiring, to help them bring their manuscripts t...

Top Rated

Top Rated sellers are individually selected by Fiverr after meeting specific benchmarks for quality and service.

What people loved about this freelancer

About this Gig

I understand how daunting it can be to hire an editor, and how important it is for that editor to be the right fit for you and your story. For that reason I offer a free sample of your first chapter to ensure that we will be the right team.


I will provide detailed feedback on:


  • Author Voice
  • Plot & Story Structure
  • Character development and arcs
  • Setting & Worldbuilding
  • Reader investment
  • Dialogue
  • Opening Scene/Hook
  • Pacing
  • Themes
  • Plus any specific areas you want me to provide feedback on


I can also provide just line editing, or can provide a package with line editing included.


You will receive:


  • Extensive in-line feedback
  • A comprehensive report per chapter.
  • An overall report highlighting your strengths as well as areas that I feel need developing.


Please note that I only work with Microsoft Word. If you have a file in another format please contact me and we can discuss how best to proceed. I do not provide clean manuscripts.


Please note that the pricing outlined is my baseline. To discuss a personalised quote for your manuscript please get in touch and we can discuss your personal needs for your project.


Very much looking forward to working with you!


Fiona

Language:

English

Genre:

Other

Audience :

General readers

Children

Teen / young adult

Adult

POV:

Other

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

Intermediate

Advanced

Voice:

Other

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

Reviews

150 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(148)
(1)
(1)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • A

    ardencael

    US

    United States

    3

    While Fiona was professional and kind, her feedback was less helpful than I had hoped. Her review was incredibly fast, both a pro and a con. While I appreciated the fast turn-around, her comments appeared somewhat shallow and consistent with AI feedback. Her feedback was literally half as long as the...

    $100-$200

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    F
    image-docs

    Seller's Response

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    m_sky_daltrey

    Repeat Client

    IE

    Ireland

    5

    This was the second review after I incorporated Fiona's feedback from the first one, and I eventually followed quite a lot of Fiona's recommendations. I don't have a ton of experience, but I worked with a few editors and I feel very comfortable with Fiona and learned very quickly how to make the best...

    $200-$400

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    anabel_coupland

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    I'm really impressed with and grateful for Fiona's work! She truly went above and beyond, and touched on everything I was concerned about in my novel. Would 100% recommend her for any beta-reading, developmental or line-editing! Thank you Fiona 😊

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    madikuyper

    US

    United States

    5

    Fiona offered me a lot of very insightful advice into what can make my story better. I’m so thankful for her set of eyes. They mean an adjective point of view into the world of my book and also how to push it towards its final stages.

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T
    image-docs

    thom36

    US

    United States

    5

    She did a wonderful job with my short story! She really understands what makes a story "tick" and shows you how to get the most out of it! I will definitely work with her again in the future. Highly recommended!

    Up to $50

    Price

    4 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

150 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(148)
(1)
(1)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • A

    ardencael

    US

    United States

    3

    While Fiona was professional and kind, her feedback was less helpful than I had hoped. Her review was incredibly fast, both a pro and a con. While I appreciated the fast turn-around, her comments appeared somewhat shallow and consistent with AI feedback. Her feedback was literally half as long as the...

    $100-$200

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    F
    image-docs

    Seller's Response

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    m_sky_daltrey

    Repeat Client

    IE

    Ireland

    5

    This was the second review after I incorporated Fiona's feedback from the first one, and I eventually followed quite a lot of Fiona's recommendations. I don't have a ton of experience, but I worked with a few editors and I feel very comfortable with Fiona and learned very quickly how to make the best...

    $200-$400

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    anabel_coupland

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    I'm really impressed with and grateful for Fiona's work! She truly went above and beyond, and touched on everything I was concerned about in my novel. Would 100% recommend her for any beta-reading, developmental or line-editing! Thank you Fiona 😊

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    madikuyper

    US

    United States

    5

    Fiona offered me a lot of very insightful advice into what can make my story better. I’m so thankful for her set of eyes. They mean an adjective point of view into the world of my book and also how to push it towards its final stages.

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T
    image-docs

    thom36

    US

    United States

    5

    She did a wonderful job with my short story! She really understands what makes a story "tick" and shows you how to get the most out of it! I will definitely work with her again in the future. Highly recommended!

    Up to $50

    Price

    4 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No