I will beta read and critique your novel with honest feedback

Do you write book after book but still struggle to find readers? Do you publish but hear nothing back? Maybe your story has problems you cannot see because you are too close to it.

I read your book and give you honest feedback like it is my own actual book. No lying. No keeping some pages not disclosed. Every scene, every chapter, every page gets read and commented on.

After I finish your manuscript, you receive a reader report that covers the strengths and weaknesses of your novel.

Here is what I look for while reading:

• Plot holes or things that do not make sense
• Pacing that feels too slow or too fast
• Characters who feel flat or act out of character
• Dialogue that sounds unnatural
• Scenes that confuse me or lose my interest
• Parts where I feel bored or want to put the book down
• Moments that should feel emotional but do not land

I tell you how a reader experiences your story. You take what helps and leave what does not. No rewriting. No judgment. Just honest feedback so you can fix your book before you publish again.

I read these genres:

• Fantasy
• Romance
• Horror
• Thriller
• Mystery
• Young Adult
• Literary Fiction
• Historical Fiction

Message me before ordering to understand your needs