I will do story critique, developmental editor for litrpg, epic, mystery, series novels

Developmental editing looks at the big-picture elements of your story, including plot, structure, pacing, character development, world-building, tension, continuity, and reader engagement. It is different from proofreading or basic grammar correction.

Yes. I can evaluate LitRPG manuscripts for story progression, pacing, character arcs, world-building, stakes, consistency, and how the progression system supports the overall narrative.

Yes. I can examine clues, suspense, reveals, pacing, character motivation, red herrings, setup, and payoff while looking at the story from the reader's perspective.

Absolutely. I can review large-scale plots, multiple characters, world-building, subplots, pacing, continuity, conflicts, and the balance between world information and forward story movement.

Yes. For series novels, I can look at continuity, character progression, unresolved threads, foreshadowing, book-to-book setup, and whether major developments feel earned.

Developmental editing is primarily about diagnosing story problems and giving practical revision guidance. I will not take over your manuscript or erase your authorial voice.

Yes. I can help with grammar, spelling, punctuation, sentence clarity, consistency, and proofreading alongside developmental editing. If your manuscript needs both story-level improvements and polished language, I can combine the services based on your project's needs.

Yes, but please contact me before ordering if your manuscript exceeds the word count included. I can create a custom offer based on the manuscript's length and the depth of editing required.

Depending on the package, you can receive developmental comments, story analysis, actionable revision suggestions, and an editorial report.