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I will developmental editing, line editing, proofreading for children book, fantasy
DEVELOPMENTAL BOOK EDITOR
My name is Florence Tilly, a professional book editor helping authors shape clear, engaging manuscripts while preserving their voice. I offer developmental editing, line editing, and proofreading. I r...
About this Gig
Hello,I'm Florence Tilly, a professional book editor working with authors to turn early drafts into clear, structured, and readable manuscripts that feel ready for real readers, not just finished on paper.
My work focuses on improving the strength of your writing without flattening your voice. I pay attention to how your story moves, how your ideas connect, and how your sentences carry meaning. The aim is simple: make the writing easier to read, more consistent, and more engaging from start to finish.
My services include:
- Developmental book editing (structure, pacing, plot, clarity)
- Line editing (flow, tone, sentence strength)
- Copy editing (grammar, punctuation, consistency)
- Proofreading (final polish before publishing)
Genres I work with:
Fantasy, fiction, romance, self-help, cookbook, and general nonfiction.
Why work with me:
- Careful, detailed edits
- Clear and honest feedback
- Consistent tone and voice preservation
- Fast delivery and reliable communication
If you need a professional editor to refine your manuscript and prepare it for publishing, Im ready to help.
Language:
Arabic
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Dutch
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English
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French
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German
Voice:
Active
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
1. What editing services do you offer?
I offer developmental editing, line editing, copy editing, and proofreading to help improve structure, clarity, grammar, and overall flow of your manuscript.
2. What genres do you work with?
I work with fiction and nonfiction, including romance, fantasy, self-help, memoir, and cookbook manuscripts.
3. Will you change my writing style?
No. I focus on improving clarity and readability while keeping your original voice and writing style intact.
4. How do you handle large manuscripts?
I review manuscripts in a structured process, focusing on consistency, pacing, grammar, and readability across the entire document.
5. What will I receive after editing?
You will receive a clean, edited manuscript with tracked changes and comments where necessary, so you can see every improvement clearly.
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camillakartal
Repeat Client
Canada
Exceptional Developmental Editing Experience Working with this editor was one of the best decisions I made for my manuscript. The developmental feedback went far beyond surface-level comments and provided a clear roadmap for improving the structure, pacing, and overall effectiveness of my book. Every...
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
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john_andrew218
Germany
Florence carefully reorganized scenes, strengthened the world-building flow, and helped balance the romance with the larger fantasy plot perfectly. The story feels far more cohesive now, and the pacing between action, emotion, and lore is much smoother. Her suggestions were smart, professional, and clearly...
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?C camillakartal
Repeat Client
Canada
The proofreading was great. Before starting my manuscript, I discovered that I had some typographical errors, and Florence helped me professionally with that. I highly recommend!
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?S seanclint
Repeat Client
United Kingdom
Outstanding experience working with this seller! They delivered a well-written 5-chapter ebook, “The Mystery of Ionak Village,” with an engaging mix of crime, suspense, and thriller elements. The formatting was professional, the storyline was captivating, and the book cover design perfectly matched the...
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?O 
odaniella
Repeat Client
Nigeria
Florence provides detailed developmental editing focused on strengthening plot structure, pacing, character arcs, world-building, emotional depth, and overall story consistency. The editing process is designed to shape the manuscript into a more immersive and engaging reading experience while preserving my unique voice and storytelling style.
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
7 reviews for this Gig
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C camillakartal
Repeat Client
Canada
Exceptional Developmental Editing Experience Working with this editor was one of the best decisions I made for my manuscript. The developmental feedback went far beyond surface-level comments and provided a clear roadmap for improving the structure, pacing, and overall effectiveness of my book. Every...
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?J john_andrew218
Germany
Florence carefully reorganized scenes, strengthened the world-building flow, and helped balance the romance with the larger fantasy plot perfectly. The story feels far more cohesive now, and the pacing between action, emotion, and lore is much smoother. Her suggestions were smart, professional, and clearly...
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?C camillakartal
Repeat Client
Canada
The proofreading was great. Before starting my manuscript, I discovered that I had some typographical errors, and Florence helped me professionally with that. I highly recommend!
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?S seanclint
Repeat Client
United Kingdom
Outstanding experience working with this seller! They delivered a well-written 5-chapter ebook, “The Mystery of Ionak Village,” with an engaging mix of crime, suspense, and thriller elements. The formatting was professional, the storyline was captivating, and the book cover design perfectly matched the...
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?O odaniella
Repeat Client
Nigeria
Florence provides detailed developmental editing focused on strengthening plot structure, pacing, character arcs, world-building, emotional depth, and overall story consistency. The editing process is designed to shape the manuscript into a more immersive and engaging reading experience while preserving my unique voice and storytelling style.
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?
