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I will beta read critique novel, romance beta reader, beta reader fantasy, alpha reader
Expert Book Editor, Proofreader and Publishing Specialist
Folashade Pen (@folashade_pen01) is a trusted editorial expert helping authors and businesses transform rough drafts into polished, publication-ready content. I specialize in book editing, beta readin...
About this Gig
Are you looking for a beta reader that can provide you with detailed, honest, and constructive feedback? Or do you feel uncertain about your story structure? Maybe your pacing drags in places, or your characters are not resonating with readers.
That's where I come in.
I'm Folashade. I hold a B.A. in Literature with a Creative Writing focus and have 6 years of experience providing professional manuscript feedback and developmental critique at Federal Polytechnic. As a professional fiction beta reader, I analyze character development, voice authenticity, dialogue effectiveness, emotional depth, and overall story flow while helping you maintain the originality of your characters and writing voice.
Whether you need a romance beta reader, a scifi beta reader, or a beta reader fantasy specialist, I provide actionable and easy-to-implement suggestions that help strengthen your manuscript without changing your storys identity.
WHAT I OFFER
- Feedback on pacing, character development, dialogue, &plot
- Notes on emotional impact & reader engagement (did I cry? did I laugh? )
- Honest reactions from a reader's perspective
- Actionable suggestion to improve your story
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Language:
English
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German
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FAQ
Can I request a specific type of feedback?
Absolutely! If you’re looking for feedback on a specific aspect, such as character development, pacing, or plot structure, feel free to let me know upfront. I tailor my feedback to meet your needs and focus on the areas that matter most to you.
Do you offer feedback on grammar and spelling?
While my focus is on the overall structure, character development, and emotional impact of your story, I can offer general observations on grammar or spelling errors if they’re noticeable. For line-by-line editing (like grammar, spelling, and sentence
Do you offer feedback on short stories or novellas?
Yes! I’m happy to work with shorter manuscripts too. For short stories and novellas, the feedback process is typically faster, but you’ll still receive the same in-depth analysis.
How long will it take to receive feedback on my manuscript?
The timeline depends on the length and complexity of your manuscript. Typically, I provide feedback within 2–3 weeks for novels (50,000–90,000 words), but I will always give you an estimated completion date when you submit your work.
Do you offer editing services after the beta reading?
Yes! After receiving beta reading feedback, many authors choose to take the next step and have their manuscript edited. I offer developmental editing, line editing, and copyediting services to help refine your manuscript further. These services
