I will do developmental and line editing for your fantasy, romance or lgbtq novel
About this Gig
I help writers improve their stories through developmental and line editing. Ill read your manuscript carefully and give you honest, clear feedback to help you make your story stronger, smoother, and more engaging.
I work with fiction stories like fantasy, romance, LGBTQ+, and young adult. Ill point out whats working well, whats confusing, and what could be improved, especially with plot, characters, pacing, and clarity.
Youll get simple, useful feedback you can actually use to improve your writing, while still keeping your own voice and style.
If you want to make your story better and more enjoyable for readers, Ive got you covered.
Language:
English
Audience :
General readers
POV:
Multiple POVs
Complexity level:
Advanced
Voice:
Other
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What’s the difference between developmental, line, and structural editing?
Developmental editing focuses on big-picture elements like plot, pacing, tone, and clarity. Line editing sharpens your sentences, flow, and voice. Structural editing strengthens the organization and chapter arrangement.
What types of books do you edit?
I work with fiction, nonfiction, memoirs, self-help, educational material, and more. If it’s a book-length manuscript, I can edit it.
Do you provide feedback on character development and pacing?
Absolutely. This is part of developmental editing. I analyze character arcs, motivations, pacing, and overall story strength.
How do I send my manuscript?
You can upload it directly through Fiverr as a Word document (.doc or .docx). I require Word files to properly use tracked changes.

