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I will find plot holes and help repair your story structure
About this Gig
Is your story nearly working, but something still feels wrong?
I will analyse your horror, fantasy, thriller or speculative-fiction story to identify plot holes, weak links, continuity problems and structural issues, then suggest practical ways to repair them.
My story diagnosis may cover:
Cause and effect
Character decisions and motivation
Timeline and continuity
Missing setup or weak payoff
Reveal order and information flow
Pacing, escalation and story momentum
Subplots that do not connect to the main spine
What youll receive:
A clear written report explaining what is not working, why it may be weakening the story, and focused patch-fixes that preserve your original vision. Standard and Premium packages also include comments within the submitted document.
Please note:
This is developmental story analysis, not proofreading, line editing or a full rewrite.
Please send a synopsis, outline, treatment or manuscript extract as a Word document or readable PDF, with a short explanation of your main concerns. For larger or complex projects, contact me before ordering.
That is safely under the 1,200-character limit.
Language:
English
Genre:
Adventure
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Horror/ thriller
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Mystery
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Science
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Fantasy
Audience :
General readers
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Teen / young adult
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Adult
Complexity level:
Simple / easy read
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Intermediate
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Advanced
Voice:
Narrative
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What is the difference between this and your beta-reading service?
Beta reading focuses mainly on how the story feels to a reader. This service goes deeper into story mechanics, identifying structural, continuity, motivation and cause-and-effect problems and suggesting practical repairs.
What material can I submit?
You may submit a synopsis, outline, treatment, chapter sequence, novella or manuscript extract within the package word limit. Please include enough context for me to understand the wider story.
Will you rewrite my story?
No. I will diagnose problems and offer focused repair options, but I will not rewrite the complete manuscript. Small illustrative examples may be included where they help explain a suggestion.
Can you analyse a complete novel?
Yes, but full novels usually require a custom offer because of their length and complexity. Please contact me first with the total word count and a brief description of the project.
Will my material remain confidential?
Yes. Your manuscript, outline and story information will remain private and will only be used to complete your order.
What does a revision include?
A revision covers clarification or adjustment of my report against the original brief. It does not include analysing a newly rewritten manuscript or rebuilding the story after major changes.
