I will be your middle grade and chapter book developmental editor and proofreader
Pro Editor and Creative Coach
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Proofreading & Editing
Writing Advice
About this Gig
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Want to spark your reader's imagination? I'm here to help you.
I'm Tom, a professional children's book editor and proofreader with over 2 million copies sold and 25+ international bestsellers under my belt. I will be your children's developmental editor, copy editor, and proofreader, helping you shape your ideas, improve your writing, and make your book the best it can be.
Look no further! This middle grade novel and chapter book editing service is here to help transform your manuscript from draft to masterpiece. Read on below to see how I can help you.
Developmental Editing
A deep manuscript analysis and commentary to identify strengths and weaknesses, and provide guidance to refine your narrative, enhance clarity, and captivate your readers.
Copy Editing / Line Editing
Line-by-line text editing to polish the writing, elevate language, and ensure age-appropriate vocabulary, all while capturing your unique voice.
Pass 3: Proofreading
A thorough review to catch lingering proofreading errors and ensure a flawless reading experience so kids and parents can focus on the magic of your story.
Specialities:
Fiction & Non Fiction
Action and Adventure
Gaming/LitRPG
Humourous
Language:
English
Audience :
General readers
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Children
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Teen / young adult
POV:
First person
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Third person limited
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Third person omniscient
Complexity level:
Simple / easy read
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Intermediate
Voice:
Narrative
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Clients I’ve worked with
Minecraft
Internet Software & Services
I was the lead editor for the official publisher of Minecraft books. I wrote and edited numerous bestsellers for the client over the course of two years, with one title winning a Sainsbury's Book Award.
Nov 2019-Nov 2021
The Adventures of Tintin
Author
I translated one of their most recent publications, Blistering Barnicles: An A-Z of the Rants, Rambles and Rages of Captain Haddock.
Dec 2020-Feb 2021
My Portfolio
Other Book Editing Services I Offer
FAQ
What makes you a Fiverr Pro?
I work with the world's biggest children's publishing houses and brands creating bestselling and award-winning books. Check out my portfolio to see some of my latest works. Clients include Minecraft, Pokemon, Tintin, Beano, Fortnite, Roblox.
I'm a first-time author. What do I need?
Send me a message and I'll be glad to discuss your project with you. I can help you at every stage of the editorial process. Additionally, if you have any publishing queries, I offer my clients the opportunity to chat and answer any questions they may have about their publishing goals.
Am I the right editor for you?
I have several years of experience writing and editing books for the global market. If you're looking for an attentive editor with a flair for creativity and humour, I'm the editor for you!
What happens to my copyright?
You keep full ownership of your copyright. I am here to help you improve and finish your book – but it is still your book!
Do you offer publishing advice?
I offer my full package clients the opportunity to have a call to talk about your project and publishing goals. I’ll answer any questions you may have as best I can. They can relate to the format and trim size, series growth, reaching a wider audience online, anything you like.
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J josterlin

United States
Tom is phenomenal! He really helped us with our story structure as well as basic editing. He was thorough, funny, and extremely detailed. He offered us so many ideas to help our story flow. He delivered his criticism in a very professional, yet fun manner. I would highly recommend working with Tom to anyone needing an excellent editor.
$1,000-$1,500
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?A agni_gra
Repeat Client

United Kingdom
I have worked with Tom on a number of projects now, and each time I have been positively impressed with his commitment to work. He consistently goes above and beyond the brief, offering ideas and suggestions that have a significant impact on the story. It is such a pleasure working with him.
$200-$400
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?A agni_gra
Repeat Client

United Kingdom
I am delighted to share my experience working with Thomas on the developmental edit of my book. His detailed and thoughtful comments were invaluable. Thomas provided insightful feedback that identified and resolved structural issues, strengthened character development, and enhanced narrative flow. His...
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?R rileyjwatson

Canada
Best experience. Thanks Tom.
$400-$600
Price
6 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
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J josterlin

United States
Tom is phenomenal! He really helped us with our story structure as well as basic editing. He was thorough, funny, and extremely detailed. He offered us so many ideas to help our story flow. He delivered his criticism in a very professional, yet fun manner. I would highly recommend working with Tom to anyone needing an excellent editor.
$1,000-$1,500
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?A agni_gra
Repeat Client

United Kingdom
I have worked with Tom on a number of projects now, and each time I have been positively impressed with his commitment to work. He consistently goes above and beyond the brief, offering ideas and suggestions that have a significant impact on the story. It is such a pleasure working with him.
$200-$400
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?A agni_gra
Repeat Client

United Kingdom
I am delighted to share my experience working with Thomas on the developmental edit of my book. His detailed and thoughtful comments were invaluable. Thomas provided insightful feedback that identified and resolved structural issues, strengthened character development, and enhanced narrative flow. His...
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?R rileyjwatson

Canada
Best experience. Thanks Tom.
$400-$600
Price
6 weeks
Duration
Helpful?

