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I will be your childrens picture book developmental editor and proofreader
Pro Editor and Creative Coach
Industry-trained book editor, book coach, and copy editor trusted by major global brands, including Minecraft, Beano, and London's Natural History Museum. I provide expert editing services to authors ...
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About this Gig
Vetted Pro
Want to spark a child's imagination? I'm here to help you.
I'm Tom, a professional children's book editor with 25+ bestsellers and over 2 million copies sold worldwide. I've worked with major publishers developing books for global brands like Minecraft. My 3-pass editing package is designed to take your book from first draft to polished manuscript, with the support you need every step of the way. We will shape your ideas, improve your writing, and make your story the best it can be.
I will be your children's developmental editor, copy editor, and proofreader,
Pass 1: Developmental Edit
A deep analysis and commentary to identify strengths and weaknesses, and provide recommendations for changes.
Pass 2: Copy / Line Edit
A line-by-line text edit to elevate language, ensure age-appropriate vocabulary, and promote your unique voice.
Pass 3: Proofread
A final pass to guarantee a polished manuscript free of distracting errors so parents and kids can focus on the story.
Specialties
- Children's Fiction
- Children's Non-Fiction
- Picture Books
- Chapter Books
- STEM Books
- Educational Books
- SEL Books
- Kid-Lit
- Rhyming (Basic +$50/ Standard +$75/ Premium +$100)
Ready? Message me today.
Language:
English
Audience :
General readers
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Children
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Teen / young adult
POV:
Third person limited
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Third person omniscient
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Multiple POVs
Complexity level:
Simple / easy read
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Intermediate
Voice:
Narrative
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Clients I’ve worked with
Minecraft
Internet Software & Services
I was the lead editor for the official publisher of Minecraft books. I wrote and edited numerous bestsellers for the client over the course of two years, with one title winning a Sainsbury's Book Award.
Nov 2019-Nov 2021
The Adventures of Tintin
Author
I translated one of their most recent publications, Blistering Barnicles: An A-Z of the Rants, Rambles and Rages of Captain Haddock.
Dec 2020-Feb 2021
My Portfolio
Gig workflow
These are the steps we’ll follow to complete your project.
- Basic Package.
- Developmental Edits
I'll conduct a first round developmental edit of your manuscript.
- Line Edits
I'll do a thorough line edit of your mansucript
- Proofreading
I'll do a final proofread to have your manuscript ready for publishing.
These are the steps we’ll follow to complete your project.
Other Book Editing Services I Offer
FAQ
What makes you a Fiverr Pro?
I work with the world's biggest children's publishing houses and brands to create bestselling and award-winning books. Check out my portfolio to see some of my latest works. Clients include Minecraft, Pokemon, Tintin, Beano, Fortnite, Rupert Bear.
I'm a first time author. What do I need?
Send me a message and I'll be glad to discuss your project with you. I can help you at every stage of the editorial process. Additionally, if you have any publishing queries, I offer my clients the opportunity to chat and answer any questions they may have about their publishing goals.
What happens to my copyright?
You keep full ownership of your copyright. I am here to help you improve and finish your book – but it is still your book!
Do you offer video calls?
Yes, I do! While I provide detailed written feedback to help you make the best book you can, I also have the option to add video calls to our collaborations. These are a great way to make the most of the editing journey. Please note I have a 24-hour cancellation and rescheduling policy.
Can you help with all ages?
Absolutely! I work on all kinds of children’s books, from simple books for younger readers to more complex chapter books. Whether you need help refining a short picture book or polishing a detailed story, I’m here to help.
Reviews
32 reviews for this Gig
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L lmbarry
Repeat Client
United States
This is the second book I have worked on with Tom and both experiences have been fantastic. He is thorough, makes excellent edits, has great input and a sense of humor and coaching style. I look forward to continuing working with Tom on future books!
$400-$600
Price
3 months
Duration
Helpful?C claudanov
United States
It was an amazing experience working with Tom on this project. Acted very professionally. He was ahead of time with the delivery as we were working on a tight schedule. I will sure work with him again for future projects.
$400-$600
Price
11 days
Duration
Helpful?L lmbarry
Repeat Client
United States
Tom was thorough, communicative, and very responsive. My book benefitted greatly from his input!
$600-$800
Price
3 months
Duration
Helpful?K kassie_rubio
United States
Tom exceeded my expectations in every way. Their editing was sharp yet respectful of my voice, and their notes helped me see my work more clearly. Communication was fast, deadlines were met perfectly, and the final product was beyond what I hoped for. I truly feel my book is stronger thanks to their expertise. Cannot thank you enough for all of your work!
$400-$600
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Helpful?K 
karinasee
Repeat Client
Indonesia
If there were 1,000 stars, I would give them all to describe Tom’s work! He is absolutely incredible—the most patient person I have ever met. Before meeting Tom, I had no idea my book wasn’t ready; I was so sure of it. But Tom poured so much knowledge into me (he’s the editor of bestselling authors with...
$600-$800
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
32 reviews for this Gig
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| (3) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
L lmbarry
Repeat Client
United States
This is the second book I have worked on with Tom and both experiences have been fantastic. He is thorough, makes excellent edits, has great input and a sense of humor and coaching style. I look forward to continuing working with Tom on future books!
$400-$600
Price
3 months
Duration
Helpful?C claudanov
United States
It was an amazing experience working with Tom on this project. Acted very professionally. He was ahead of time with the delivery as we were working on a tight schedule. I will sure work with him again for future projects.
$400-$600
Price
11 days
Duration
Helpful?L lmbarry
Repeat Client
United States
Tom was thorough, communicative, and very responsive. My book benefitted greatly from his input!
$600-$800
Price
3 months
Duration
Helpful?K kassie_rubio
United States
Tom exceeded my expectations in every way. Their editing was sharp yet respectful of my voice, and their notes helped me see my work more clearly. Communication was fast, deadlines were met perfectly, and the final product was beyond what I hoped for. I truly feel my book is stronger thanks to their expertise. Cannot thank you enough for all of your work!
$400-$600
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Helpful?K karinasee
Repeat Client
Indonesia
If there were 1,000 stars, I would give them all to describe Tom’s work! He is absolutely incredible—the most patient person I have ever met. Before meeting Tom, I had no idea my book wasn’t ready; I was so sure of it. But Tom poured so much knowledge into me (he’s the editor of bestselling authors with...
$600-$800
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
