I will be your dark romance beta reader and give honest manuscript feedback

Nigeria

I speak English

Helping Authors Turn Good Stories Into Great Books

I'm Pelumi, and I help authors publish books they're proud to put their name on. Most manuscripts don't fail because the story is bad. They fail because no one caught the plot holes, weak pacing, inco...
About this Gig

Your dark romance deserves more than a quick read. It deserves honest, detailed feedback that helps you create a story readers won't forget.


Whether you're writing mafia romance, enemies-to-lovers, gothic romance, paranormal romance, billionaire romance, taboo romance, or psychological romance, you'll receive constructive beta reading focused on what truly matters to your audience.


I'll identify plot holes, pacing issues, weak dialogue, inconsistent characters, confusing scenes, emotional gaps, and anything that could stop readers from finishing your book. You'll also learn what's working well, so you can build on your strengths with confidence.


You'll receive:

  • Honest manuscript feedback
  • Character and relationship analysis
  • Plot and pacing review
  • Emotional tension evaluation
  • Dialogue and scene feedback
  • Reader experience insights
  • Light grammar and readability suggestions
  • Clear, actionable recommendations


Perfect for first drafts, completed novels, novellas, Wattpad stories, Kindle Vella, Amazon KDP, and indie authors.


Give your manuscript the feedback it needs before you publish. Send a message to discuss your project.

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

Humor/ entertainment

Literary fiction

Language:

English

German

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