I will professionally diagnose your story or novel

United States

I speak English

Professional Developmental Editor for Fiction and Memoirs

I help authors turn unfinished, confusing, or underperforming manuscripts into clear, compelling, publishable books readers can't put down. I specialize in story structure, pacing, character, and cl...
About this Gig

Most writers don't need more line edits.

They need to know why their story isn't working.

I'm a fiction author and developmental editor specializing in story structure, character, pacing, and narrative clarity. Instead of nitpicking your prose, I'll diagnose the core problems holding your story back and give you clear, prioritized direction on what to fix.


Think of this like a story doctor's report, not a proofreading pass.


Perfect for writers who aren't ready to commit to a full developmental edit but need to know whether they're heading in the right direction before wasting time and money on endless revisions.

Language:

English

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

Memoir/ biography

Mystery

Fantasy

Audience :

General readers

Teen / young adult

Adult

POV:

First person

Second person

Third person limited

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

Intermediate

Advanced

Voice:

Narrative

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

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