I will developmentally edit your manuscript with extensive feedback

Writing a novel is hard work! Let me assist you by getting your manuscript from good to great. I give tough love feedback with attention to detail and a very tight write up with exercises to further develop your writing.

Plot:

I will help you develop your plot so that it is enjoyable and expansive within the limits of readability.

Characters

I will help you make your characters relevant and realistic, as well as develop their relationships with each other.

Dialogue:

I I will help your dialogue, quoted and unquoted, feel relevant and enjoyable to the reader

Flow

I will also ensure your scenes play segue smoothly and evenly, and that your scenarios play out naturalistically.

World building

I will ensure that your world has internal and external coherence and that it serves to enrich your story.

All these elements will be tracked using the "track changes" feature on MS word. My write up will also include areas of improved, positives areas which you should keep in your novel.