I will be your analytical beta reader for action thriller and romance

Hi, I'm Giulia. As a regular reader who spends a lot of time with action, thriller, and romance books, I know how important it is to have an outside perspective on your work before moving forward.

My goal is to read your first 5,000 words and give you honest, constructive feedback from a real reader's point of view. I want to help you see how an average consumer experiences your story.

Here is what I will look at:

Pacing & Hook: Does the opening hold attention? Is the rhythm of the story natural?

Characters: Do the dialogues sound believable? Are the character actions convincing in moments of suspense or romance?

Plot Clarity: Are there any confusing details or early contradictions?

You will receive a detailed reader report with my honest thoughts on what works well and where the story could be tightened up. 

I'm ready to dive into your manuscript.