I will beta read and edit your romance or romantasy first chapter

Grace B

Chile

I speak English, German, Spanish, French, Italian

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About this Gig

Your romance first chapter has one job: hook the reader and make them care about the couple. Too many openings feel flat, the chemistry is missing, the meet cute falls flat, or the voice doesn't pull readers in.


I will beta read and lightly edit your romance first chapter so it grabs attention from the first page.


What you receive:

  • Detailed chapter feedback or inline comments (my real time reactions as a romance reader)
  • A clear reader report with overall impressions + notes on hook, chemistry, character introduction, pacing, tropes, and emotional pull
  • Light line edits in the Premium package for smoother flow and clarity.


I focus only on romance. I read as your target reader and show you exactly what works, what feels off, and how to make the opening irresistible.


Send your first chapter document, the word count, subgenre, and any specific questions. Lets make your opening chapter impossible to put down.

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Genre:

Horror/ thriller

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Mystery

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Psychology

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Romance

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Fantasy

Language:

English

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Spanish

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