I will alpha and beta read your fiction novel with detailed critique and feedback
Helping author streghten and polish impactful story
About this Gig
Looking for honest alpha or beta reading for your fiction novel?
I will carefully read your manuscript and provide detailed, constructive feedback to help you strengthen your story. Whether your draft is still rough (alpha) or more polished (beta), Ill give you clear insights from a readers perspective.
What Youll Receive:
- Full manuscript read with in-line comments
- Detailed critique covering:
- Plot and structure
- Pacing and tension
- Character development
- Dialogue and voice
- Emotional impact
- Overall strengths and weaknesses
- Actionable suggestions for improvement
- Honest but supportive feedback
I work with most Fiction genres, including:
Fantasy
Dark Romance
Romance
Sci-Fi
Thriller
Mystery
I do not use AI. All feedback is written by me after reading your work.
Please message me before ordering with:
Your genre
Approximate word count
Whether you need Alpha reading (early draft) or Beta reading (later draft)
Any specific areas you want me to focus on
Lets make your fiction story stronger and more engaging for readers.
Language:
English
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Italian
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Do you use AI?
No. I do not use AI. All reading, comments, and feedback are done by me personally.
What is the difference between Alpha and Beta reading?
Alpha reading is for early/rough drafts. I focus on big-picture issues like plot, structure, characters, and overall story direction. Beta reading is for more polished drafts. I focus on pacing, emotional impact, consistency, and reader experience.
Will you fix grammar or rewrite my scenes?
No. This is a critique and feedback service, not copyediting or rewriting. I may point out clarity issues when they affect the reading experience.
Which genres do you accept?
I mainly work with Fiction, including Fantasy, Dark Romance, Romance, Sci-Fi, Thriller, and Mystery. Feel free to message me if your genre is different.
What will I receive?
You will get in-line comments on your manuscript plus a detailed feedback report covering plot, pacing, characters, dialogue, emotional impact, strengths, and areas for improvement.
Can I request feedback on specific areas?
Yes. If you'd like me to focus on pacing, romance chemistry, character development, world-building, or another aspect, just let me know before I begin.
Do you accept longer manuscripts?
Yes. Please contact me for a custom offer if your manuscript exceeds the package word limits.
Can you read explicit or dark content?
Yes. I am comfortable with mature, explicit, and dark themes, including morally gray characters.
Can I order a second round after making revisions?
Yes. A second round of feedback is available as a custom offer or gig extra.
Is my manuscript confidential?
Absolutely. Your work is private and will never be shared with anyone.

