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I will do in depth developmental editing for fantasy adventure stories
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I’m Olivia Hayes, a professional developmental editor specializing in adventure, fantasy, sci-fi, children’s & young adult, and mystery novels. I help authors strengthen plot, pacing, characters, worl...
About this Gig
Are you writing a fantasy adventure story and want it to be immersive, well-structured, and unforgettable? I offer in-depth developmental editing designed to strengthen your plot, characters, world-building, and overall narrative flow, so your story captivates readers from the first page to the last.
Developmental editing goes beyond grammar and spelling. I focus on the big picture elements that make your story work:
- Plot structure and pacing
- Character development and arcs
- World-building consistency and depth
- Clarity, coherence, and reader engagement
Whether you're working on an epic fantasy, heros journey, magical quest, or high-adventure tale, I will provide detailed feedback, actionable suggestions, and professional insights to help you refine your story into its strongest version.
You will receive:
- A fully edited manuscript with in-text comments
- A detailed editorial report
- Honest, constructive, and supportive feedback
- Suggestions to enhance storytelling and reader impact
My goal is to help you turn your draft into a compelling, polished, and market-ready fantasy adventure story.
Lets bring your world to life, message me before ordering to discuss your project!
Language:
English
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French
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German
Genre:
Adventure
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Children’s books
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Mystery
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Science fiction
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Fantasy
Audience :
Children
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Teen / young adult
POV:
First person
Complexity level:
Simple / easy read
Voice:
Active
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What is developmental editing for fantasy adventure stories?
Developmental editing improves your story’s plot, pacing, characters, structure, and world-building to make your fantasy adventure more engaging and market-ready.
What types of fantasy and adventure books do you edit?
I edit epic fantasy, YA fantasy, high fantasy, dark fantasy, magical realism, and action-packed adventure stories.
What will I receive after the editing is complete?
You’ll receive in-text comments, a detailed editorial report, and clear, actionable feedback to improve your manuscript.
Do you rewrite my fantasy novel?
No. I provide professional guidance and suggestions while keeping your unique voice and style.
Can you edit unfinished drafts or first versions?
Yes! I offer developmental editing for both unfinished drafts and completed fantasy manuscripts.
Is this service suitable for first-time authors?
Yes, I work with both new and experienced writers, offering clear and supportive feedback.
Do you fix grammar and typos?
This gig focuses on story development. Proofreading and grammar editing are available as extras.
Should I contact you before ordering?
Yes, please message me with your word count, genre, and goals so I can recommend the best package.
