I will read and react to the first chapter of your novel

The first pages of your manuscript are make or break for readers and agents alike. Put your best food forward by getting multiple outside opinions on this critical aspect of your work.

I will provide a report (more than one page) detailing what you're doing well and where you could improve. I'll synthesize your hook from a reader's perspective and identify any potential craft issues that might stall readers.

If you have any particular concerns, I will address those questions in my report.

Let's work together to make your first chapter shine!