I will developmentally edit your fiction novel or memoir
Senior Editor and Publishing Professional
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What people loved about this freelancer
estephenson369

United States
I wish I could give Cate 10 stars! Cate goes above and beyond in her work. I felt like she truly understood my work, where I was coming from and the message...
lukasmeier1981

Austria
Cate has once again exceeded my expectations with her constructive feedback, not only with her voice notes, but also by using incredibly detailed line editing. She is a true professional. Mind blowing.
kalm42

United States
What I appreciated most about working with Cate was her ability to strike a balance between being supportive and encouraging, while also providing constructive...
timpatchen

Spain
I highly recommend working with Cate! She is very insightful and delivers feedback in a constructive manner. Her communication is very clear and her responses...
About this Gig
Vetted Pro
Gain breakthrough story development from a memoir and fiction editor with Big Five publishing credits. What's included:
- In-line comments at a sentence and paragraph level, targeting pace, style, clarity, continuity, dialogue, description, action, exposition, and writing impact.
- A private podcast: Developmental audio notes exploring the characters, premise, theme, structure, and bespoke strategies.
- The writers' room: 100% new and original scene-level ideas; the same collaborative process given to bestselling, traditionally published authors.
Writers describe this edit as eye-opening, energizing, and empowering, but it's wise to only invest in development if you're ready to make meaningful changes to your work.
️This gig is for story-based projects only: i.e., memoir, adventure, romance, sci-fi, suspense, YA, historical, fantasy, etc. Editing is also available for short stories, children's books, and screenplays, but please reach out for a quote. Non-fiction (self-help) is not included, sorry!
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Clients I’ve worked with
Bloom Books
Writing & Publishing
Intensive outline development, manuscript development, and line editing for romance and young adult titles sold in major outlets like Walmart, Target, and airport retailers.
Jan 2023-Feb 2023
Novelists, Inc.
Commercial Writing
Guest contributor for the "Best of Novelists Inc." professional writing guide, conference materials, and newsletter, produced exclusively for multi-bestselling, traditionally published authors in the USA.
Nov 2018
My Portfolio
Gig workflow
These are the steps we’ll follow to complete your project.
- Basic Package.
- Requirements
We'll make sure I have everything needed to complete your project.
- Line Edits
I'll do a thorough line edit of your mansucript
- Delivery
I'll send you the final delivery for review and feedback.
- Follow-up session
We'll have a follow-up session to discuss any open questions.
These are the steps we’ll follow to complete your project.
Other Book Editing Services I Offer
FAQ
Why does your line editing and development cost more than others?
Industry seniority aside, each project includes in-line and developmental edits, story ideation, and intensive instruction. This process delves deeper into the content than a standard line edit and is best suited to writers who feel ready to make meaningful, structural updates to their work.
What is a Pro Seller, versus regular Fiverr seller?
Fiverr Pro editors are hand-vetted and verified by Fiverr. Each of us has a proven track record in publishing. With under 1% of applicants accepted, working with Pro editors can help ensure you receive the experience, professionalism, and support you deserve.
Is my work ready for beta reading, line editing, or copy editing?
If you're unsure, please feel free to send me the first 5k words of your current draft and I'll be happy to advise you further.
Does this service include proofreading and copy editing?
Line and developmental edits focus on the content of your scenes. Polishing the text comes later, once you've implemented the recommendations and reached an advanced draft stage. This is because it's premature to invest your budget in polishing the text while you're still finalizing the content.
What's the difference between line editing and developmental editing?
Line editing focuses on refining your story at a sentence and paragraph level. Developmental edits address the bigger picture—plot, structure, pacing, character arcs, and theme. Unlike many editors, I include developmental insights in my line edits.
Can you edit my non-fiction book?
I specialize in developing narrative texts, i.e. stories. This includes non-fiction memoir but does not extend to instructional books, self-help, business how-tos, etc. Regardless, feel free to contact me with your request, and I'll be happy to refer you to non-fiction book editors.
Will you edit my short story, screenplay, or children's book?
Yes! But please contact me for a custom quote. If I'm not able to assist for any reason, I'll put you in touch with an editor who specializes in your required field.
Do you edit full-length novels?
Absolutely! This gig is an opportunity to receive valuable feedback on your opening chapters and experience the power of professional development. If you wish to continue past this stage, I provide subsidized rates for larger projects.
What support do I receive after you've delivered the edit?
Post-edit, you are welcome to send me your questions and thoughts. If you'd like me to read/edit your new and updated draft, I will propose a quote as required. Because key issues should have been resolved by that stage, the fee is usually a fraction of the original edit cost.
Do you use AI tools or outsource to other editors?
You'll work solely with me throughout your edit, and I do not use AI tools in my edits. If you require a transcript of your audio notes, I will use an AI program to convert the audio recording into text.
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westshire777
Repeat Client

United Arab Emirates
Working with Cate Hogan on my thriller manuscript has been an incredible experience. Her feedback went far beyond simple editing — she deeply analyzed the structure, character motivations, plot logic, pacing, and psychological depth of the story. She approached the novel with remarkable insight and professionalism,...
$2,000-$3,000
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10 days
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nataliehintsits

United States
Working with Cate has been an incredibly valuable experience. She provided detailed, thoughtful, and highly professional feedback at both the structural and line levels, supported by extensive written notes and clear audio explanations. What stood out most was her ability to identify deeper story elements—character...
$800-$1,000
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11 days
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Helpful?A albatronvo5
Repeat Client

United States
Cate has continued to be an exceptional editor on all the projects she has helped me with so far. I highly recommend her for both developmental editing and in-line granular editing work.
$4,000 and above
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3 weeks
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innov8ar
Repeat Client

United States
Working with Cate goes beyond what I'd expected from this process. Her comments, suggestions, and ideas are not just on target, but they hit the bullseye! I've worked with her on several aspects of my novel and I've been more than pleased every time!
$400-$600
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10 days
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brycehatch616
Repeat Client

United States
Cate Hogan truly shines in the realm of book editing! Her professional line-by-line edit, combined with a deep understanding of my novel, transformed my work into something exceptional. Her attention to detail, politeness, and timely delivery made the entire collaboration a delightful experience. I can't wait to work with her again! 😊
$50-$100
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11 days
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westshire777
Repeat Client

United Arab Emirates
Working with Cate Hogan on my thriller manuscript has been an incredible experience. Her feedback went far beyond simple editing — she deeply analyzed the structure, character motivations, plot logic, pacing, and psychological depth of the story. She approached the novel with remarkable insight and professionalism,...
$2,000-$3,000
Price
10 days
Duration
H 
Seller's Response
Helpful?N 
nataliehintsits

United States
Working with Cate has been an incredibly valuable experience. She provided detailed, thoughtful, and highly professional feedback at both the structural and line levels, supported by extensive written notes and clear audio explanations. What stood out most was her ability to identify deeper story elements—character...
$800-$1,000
Price
11 days
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?A albatronvo5
Repeat Client

United States
Cate has continued to be an exceptional editor on all the projects she has helped me with so far. I highly recommend her for both developmental editing and in-line granular editing work.
$4,000 and above
Price
3 weeks
Duration
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Seller's Response
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innov8ar
Repeat Client

United States
Working with Cate goes beyond what I'd expected from this process. Her comments, suggestions, and ideas are not just on target, but they hit the bullseye! I've worked with her on several aspects of my novel and I've been more than pleased every time!
$400-$600
Price
10 days
Duration
H 
Seller's Response
Helpful?B 
brycehatch616
Repeat Client

United States
Cate Hogan truly shines in the realm of book editing! Her professional line-by-line edit, combined with a deep understanding of my novel, transformed my work into something exceptional. Her attention to detail, politeness, and timely delivery made the entire collaboration a delightful experience. I can't wait to work with her again! 😊
$50-$100
Price
11 days
Duration
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