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I will critique the opening pages of your thriller novel
MA Creative Writing, Traditionally Published Thriller Author
I hold a Master's degree in Creative Writing and am the traditionally published author of three psychological thriller novels published by Tule Publishing. I provide detailed manuscript critiques and ...
About this Gig
Your opening pages are your chance to hook readers, agents and publishers.
As a traditionally published author with an MA in Creative Writing, I will provide honest, constructive developmental feedback on your first chapter or opening pages.
My critique focuses on:
- Opening hook
- Character engagement
- Pacing and tension
- Dialogue
- Narrative voice
- Reader immersion
- Overall strengths and areas for improvement
You will receive a detailed written report with practical suggestions to help strengthen your manuscript.
Please note that feedback is subjective and reflects my professional opinion as a reader, writer and manuscript reviewer.
Genre:
Horror/ thriller
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Mystery
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Other
Language:
English
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FAQ
Will you rewrite my manuscript?
No. I provide developmental feedback and suggestions rather than ghostwriting or rewriting.
Do you work with all genres?
I specialise in psychological thrillers, mystery, women's fiction, contemporary fiction and literary fiction.
Will you tell me if something isn't working?
Yes. My feedback is honest, constructive and designed to help strengthen your manuscript.
Can I ask questions about the feedback?
Yes. Clarification questions are welcome after delivery.
What do revisions include?
Revisions are limited to clarification of feedback and recommendations provided in the report. They do not include a re-read of revised material or a second full critique.
Can I submit more words than the package allows?
Yes. If your manuscript exceeds the word limit for a package, please contact me before ordering. I will be happy to discuss your project and create a custom offer if appropriate.
