I will beta read your story
Feedback from a published author who knows what works
About this Gig
As the author of six published novels, I provide beta reading feedback that goes beyond general notes. I offer insights grounded in real writing experience. As a beta reader, I will give you feedback from a reader's perspective. I will answer any questions about:
- How believable are your story, characters, or plot
- Does the pacing push the story forward
- Plot tension, as well as the tension between characters
- Characters (arcs and developments, motivations, voice, likeability, etc.)
- How's the dialogue (does it flow, is there enough, too much? Can you tell the characters apart by their speech patterns)
- The plot (does it make sense, is it self-contained, is it engaging, are the stakes raising realistically)
- The setting (does it provide enough for the theatre of the mind? Does it reflect the mood and theme of your work
- The beginning (what I think the promise of the plot is, does it hook the reader)
- The ending (is it emotionally satisfying, does it connect to the beginning, does it follow genre standards)
- Powerful and weak scenes
Please message me before ordering.
Genre:
Romance
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
How detailed is your feedback?
My feedback includes both line-level notes and overall story structure advice, highlighting strengths and areas for improvement.
What genres do you specialize in?
I’ve worked with fantasy, sci-fi, romance, and contemporary fiction. My feedback focuses on story structure, character development, and readability across genres.
How long is the Zoom session?
Each session is 30 minutes.
What topics can we cover during the Zoom meeting?
We can discuss plot, character development, pacing, dialogue, world-building, and any questions you have about your story. You can also get advice on how to implement beta reader feedback effectively.
Can I schedule multiple Zoom meetings?
Yes! You can book additional 30-minute sessions at $50 each if you’d like more in-depth discussion.
What if I can’t attend the Zoom session at the scheduled time?
We can reschedule with at least 24 hours notice. Sessions are limited to one reschedule per booking.

