I will be your beta reader for fantasy and romance books
About this Gig
Fantasy & Romance beta reader focused on actionable feedback. I analyze your story like your target reader would - checking plot holes, pacing, and character development.
Portuguese native, English conversational. I read in English daily and focus on story structure, not grammar policing.
What you get:
In-line comments on your manuscript
3-page report: Plot, Pacing, Characters, Tropes
Honest feedback that respects your story goals - no generic criticism
72-hour guaranteed delivery
All communication stays on Fiverr for your safety
I do NOT provide developmental editing or ghostwriting. I do NOT click external links.
Check my sample report in the gallery to see my feedback style.
Genre:
Adventure
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Romance
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Science fiction
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Fantasy
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Other
Language:
English
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Portuguese
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
My Portfolio
FAQ
What file format should I send?
I highly prefer Google Docs links (with editing/commenting access), as I deliver my in-line comments directly there. However, Microsoft Word (.docx) files are also welcome.
Do you edit or proofread?
No. I provide reader feedback, not line editing or grammar correction. I focus on story, pacing, and character issues.
Will you sign an NDA?
Yes. Your manuscript is 100% confidential. I'm happy to sign an NDA before starting.

