I will beta read your novel or script

Vetted Pro

4.2
4.2

United States

I speak English

155 orders completed

Editing, Proofreading, Mentoring, Novels, Scripts, Comics

I'm a writer, editor, and book designer. I live in the Los Angeles area, and I work with prose, scripts, and graphic novels. I work with all genres but specialize in science fiction and fantasy. My fa...
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Cheryl M was selected by the Fiverr Pro team for their expertise.

Vetted for

  • Beta Reading

  • Book Editing

  • Proofreading & Editing

  • Writing Advice

About this Gig

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**PLEASE MESSAGE ME TO DISCUSS BEFORE ORDERING**


Does your book have good bones? Get a reader's perspective, and find out what type of editing package you should be considering for your MS. 

Simple Beta Read: A full read of your MS, a completed 40-question report from your reader, recommended editorial steps, and follow-up questions are allowed within reason (no developmental or coaching/mentoring questions are allowed).

Complex Beta Read: Simple Beta Read, plus comments within the MS flagging where things were confusing, forced, unclear, or particularly good.

Editorial Analysis is an editorial review that reviews not just the story but also skill. Instead of a 40-page questionnaire, you'll have an editor's eyes reviewing your MS for all the things that make a book engaging, and you'll receive a detailed report mapping your story's characters, arcs, and plot. The editor will also review how well you execute your story through craft. The report will include examples and suggestions for improvement, as even the best writers can find places to improve. No comments within the MS.

Each level includes a sample line edit of 1000 words.

Fiction only. No editing involved.

Genre:

Comic book

Horror/ thriller

Mystery

Romance

Science fiction

Language:

English

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6 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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    4.7
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    3.7
  • Service as described
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    joehenderson297

    US

    United States

    2.7

    This gig by Cheryl M was an "editorial assessment' of my science fiction/fantasy manuscript. I had assumed that it would be in much more detail than the less expensive beta reads I have also received recently, but most of my beta readers gave me more input. The report was mostly cut and pasted--generic...

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

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    jomobenun

    US

    United States

    5

    Cheryl provided helpful and encouraging feedback on my children’s picture book. She was friendly, quick to respond, and delivered in a flash. Pleasure working with you, Cheryl!

    Helpful?
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    cmumailman

    US

    United States

    5

    The beta reader included a partial line edit which was actually more helpful than the questionnaire because it was more specific. I also appreciate the reader's enthusiasm and her engagement with the manuscript. I don't think she's necessarily the target audience for my book, which is more like Neal...

    Helpful?
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    No
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    guthunk

    US

    United States

    5

    I got a lot of insight into what worked and what didn't in a detailed beta questionare. thanks for all your hard work.

    Helpful?
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    No
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    benjaminjens548

    DK

    Denmark

    5

    Highly recocmended!

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

6 reviews for this Gig
4.2

(5)
(0)
(1)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.7
  • Recommend to a friend
    3.7
  • Service as described
    4.3
Sort By
Most relevant
  • J

    joehenderson297

    US

    United States

    2.7

    This gig by Cheryl M was an "editorial assessment' of my science fiction/fantasy manuscript. I had assumed that it would be in much more detail than the less expensive beta reads I have also received recently, but most of my beta readers gave me more input. The report was mostly cut and pasted--generic...

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J
    image-docs

    jomobenun

    US

    United States

    5

    Cheryl provided helpful and encouraging feedback on my children’s picture book. She was friendly, quick to respond, and delivered in a flash. Pleasure working with you, Cheryl!

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C
    image-docs

    cmumailman

    US

    United States

    5

    The beta reader included a partial line edit which was actually more helpful than the questionnaire because it was more specific. I also appreciate the reader's enthusiasm and her engagement with the manuscript. I don't think she's necessarily the target audience for my book, which is more like Neal...

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • G
    image-docs

    guthunk

    US

    United States

    5

    I got a lot of insight into what worked and what didn't in a detailed beta questionare. thanks for all your hard work.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • B

    benjaminjens548

    DK

    Denmark

    5

    Highly recocmended!

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No