I will do a line edit on your manuscript
Detailed feedback and suggestions from a professional editor
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My goal with line editing is to make the prose shine, ensuring clarity, impact, and flow while preserving your voice.
I suggest ways to
- ensure clear communication of ideas/emotions/action (depending on genre)
- improve flow
- strengthen sentences
- reduce repetition
- use stronger verbs
- tighten the text
- remove filler words.
Often, I will offer several rewriting suggestions for a particular sentence so you can choose the one that best fits your voice and what you want to communicate. When it comes to repetition, I suggest alternate words. I also make changes directly to the text using tracked changes, lightly editing the grammar as needed.
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What is the difference between a line edit and a developmental/structural edit?
Think of editing as a process of refinement, starting with the biggest picture stuff, and leading down to the details of comma usage. The developmental edit comes first, helping you hammer out the story, the character arc, the pacing, all that big picture stuff, while a line edit refines sentences.
Do you offer custom orders for different word counts?
Absolutely! I can create a custom order for any word count. My standard rate is $.025 per word, however, my minimum project rate is $150.
What genres do you work in?
For line editing, I work in almost all genres, however, I prefer not to read horror, high-spiced romance, LGBTQ+ books. Please reach out to tell me more about your manuscript so we can see if we're a good fit for each other.
Do you edit grammar?
I only lightly edit the grammar. In a line edit, my focus is on making your sentences sparkle. However, I will correct typos and obvious errors. But, I'm not a copyeditor.
Do you line edit English translations of books published in other languages?
Yes, however, I will need to work closely with the author, collaborating to ensure that my line editing suggestions are true to the meaning and intent of the original text. Please reach out with information about your project, and I'll be happy to discuss working together!
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I had an absolutely wonderful experience working with Yvonne. She was a gem from start to finish. Highly communicative, responded quickly, and delivered exceptional work under a very tight timeline without ever compromising on quality. What stood out most was how she went beyond the basics. She provided...
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I had an absolutely wonderful experience working with Yvonne. She was a gem from start to finish. Highly communicative, responded quickly, and delivered exceptional work under a very tight timeline without ever compromising on quality. What stood out most was how she went beyond the basics. She provided...
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