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I will do a developmental edit on your book
Detailed feedback and suggestions from a professional editor
I'm a writer and editor with over ten years of hard-won experience writing novels, short stories, and articles. I'm passionate about story structure, great dialogue, and character-driven stories.
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About this Gig
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As a novelist, I know from personal experience how daunting and NECESSARY it is to submit your manuscript to an editor.
The first time I had a developmental edit on my work was eye-opening in the extreme, but it made a huge difference in the quality of my novel and the writing I've done since. My one wish was that I'd done it sooner.
When you get a developmental edit, you are investing in your skills and your story, and that is money well spent.
**Ask for your free sample edit today**
So, what do you get out of the deal?
A Word document of your manuscript with tracked changes & in-line comments plus an editor letter.
Feedback Includes:
- Story structure, plot holes, inconsistencies
- Readability, tone, POV, and pacing.
- Suggestions to improve the clarity, impact, and flow of prose
- Identification of character inconsistencies, on-the-nose dialogue, etc.
- Suggestions to correct clichés and other issues
- Catch grammar mistakes/light proofreading
- As well as advice, support, links, resources, & recommendations
I live and breathe stories. Making books engaging and impactful is my life's passion. I'd be thrilled to work with you on taking your novel (or short story!) to the next level.
Language:
English
Audience :
General readers
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Teen / young adult
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Adult
POV:
First person
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Third person limited
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Third person omniscient
Complexity level:
Simple / easy read
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Intermediate
Voice:
Active
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
How do I know if we're a good fit?
Please get in touch ahead of time! I'm happy to answer your questions. When you write, please tell me about your book (genre, audience, length), your writing process, and what you're looking for from the editing process.
What if my word count doesn't match the Gig options?
No problem! If your manuscript is over 60,000 words, I can create a custom offer for you in a snap. Simply send me a message, and I'll have it over to you as soon as I can. Want to do the math yourself before reaching out so you know what to expect? Simply multiply your word count by $0.025.
Why should I choose you?
I’m thorough, detailed, and I’ve spent the last 12 years honing my writing and editing skills. I’ve put my own work through up to four rounds of beta readers and up to seven rounds of edits so I know exactly what kind of feedback is most helpful.
What genres do you read?
In fiction I love to read fantasy, science fiction, historical fiction, young adult fiction, and middle grade fiction. I enjoy tales of friendship, adventure, bravery, and fascinating worlds. I also enjoy memoir, narrative non-fiction, and how-to books that implement story.
Are there any genres you don't accept?
Horror, erotica, LGBTQ, and steamy romance novels aren't my thing. Since I don't enjoy reading these genres, you'll be much better off finding an editor who LOVES them.
What is developmental editing?
Developmental editing (also called structural editing) is the first step in the book editing process. It looks at the manuscript from a big-picture viewpoint, considering structure, plot, character development, and more. It helps strengthen the story as a whole.
Why is developmental editing so expensive?
Developmental editing is a very time-consuming process. Every manuscript is different and requires an intelligent, thoughtful, and comprehensive approach. Not only do developmental editors leave in-line and embedded comments, they also write a report outlining key problems and recommending solutions
How is developmental editing different from beta reading?
Beta readers can often tell when something isn't working in your book. Maybe they lost interest, they were confused, or a character didn't capture their interest. But they can't always say WHY they feel the way they do. Most can't say HOW TO FIX IT, while a dev editor aims to offer SOLUTIONS.
Is my manuscript ready for a developmental edit?
Have you edited your manuscript & gotten it to be the best YOU can make it? If not, I recommend doing at LEAST 1 round of beta-reading and subsequent self-editing first, preferably a couple of rounds. The better your manuscript, the better feedback a dev editor can offer (& the less $s you'll spend)
Do you use AI?
I guarantee 100% human editing; AI used only for light grammar inline checks, not story suggestions.
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D deeanidem
Australia
Yvonne was amazing to work with! This is my first book, first developmental edit experience and wow she just exceeded every expectation i had. She was polite, responsive and went above and beyond. i would highly recommend her services. Thank you Yvonne.
$2,000-$3,000
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?K kyliemanu
Canada
Yvonne did an amazing job. She exceeded my expectations. I look forward to working with her again.
$400-$600
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?L loubasenese
United States
Yvonne exceeded my expectations. She was candid, forthright and offered provocative suggestions.
$800-$1,000
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?F fannygip
Malaysia
In one word: Amazing! Yvonne is incredibly professional, and working with her was truly an outstanding experience from start to finish. From the very first exchange, I felt supported, understood, and in safe hands. She worked on my project as if it were her own, with a level of dedication and care that...
$1,500-$2,000
Price
6 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J jasondaniels9
United States
Yvonne was incredibly thoughtful, detailed, and helpful in her feedback and suggestions. She delivered ahead of time on a tight timeline and exceeded my expectations with tailored recommendations and many brilliant considerations I hadn't yet thought of. My work is much better off for going through her careful review.
$400-$600
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
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43 reviews for this Gig
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D deeanidem
Australia
Yvonne was amazing to work with! This is my first book, first developmental edit experience and wow she just exceeded every expectation i had. She was polite, responsive and went above and beyond. i would highly recommend her services. Thank you Yvonne.
$2,000-$3,000
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?K kyliemanu
Canada
Yvonne did an amazing job. She exceeded my expectations. I look forward to working with her again.
$400-$600
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?L loubasenese
United States
Yvonne exceeded my expectations. She was candid, forthright and offered provocative suggestions.
$800-$1,000
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?F fannygip
Malaysia
In one word: Amazing! Yvonne is incredibly professional, and working with her was truly an outstanding experience from start to finish. From the very first exchange, I felt supported, understood, and in safe hands. She worked on my project as if it were her own, with a level of dedication and care that...
$1,500-$2,000
Price
6 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J jasondaniels9
United States
Yvonne was incredibly thoughtful, detailed, and helpful in her feedback and suggestions. She delivered ahead of time on a tight timeline and exceeded my expectations with tailored recommendations and many brilliant considerations I hadn't yet thought of. My work is much better off for going through her careful review.
$400-$600
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
