I will rewrite your script and do doctoring

This service includes:

Creating new areas of conflict and amping up the stakes by introducing new characters and story beats, or cutting them.

Introducing new thematic questions and character arcs, etc.

Melding two or more characters together in order to streamline and focus the story.

Polishing the dialogue. Adding more subtext and humor and/or making it sound more natural. Making sure each character’s dialogue sounds individual and specific to them. 

Enhancing scenes. Creating more conflict, suspense and surprises. Making sure each scene ends on a “button” that pushes the story forward. Elevating individual beats by adding humor and drama. 

Polishing characters. Providing or suggesting more emotional beats in order to amp up the connection between reader and character. Making sure all the character’s arcs are properly resolved and reflect the theme.

If your script is more than 90 pages long, please, contact me for a custom offer.