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I will be your developmental book editor, story structure, character development, plot
Beta Reader, Story And Character Development, Specialist Feedback that Elevates
I’m Mahone, a publishing expert with over 12 years of experience and a PhD in Linguistics. I specialize in beta reading and developmental editing that strengthens compelling characters, strong plots, ...
About this Gig
Need a professional developmental editor to strengthen your story, characters, and plot?
I'm Mahone, a professional developmental book editor specializing in story structure, character development, pacing, emotional depth, and plot refinement. I help fiction authors turn rough manuscripts into compelling, reader-focused stories that feel polished, immersive, and unforgettable. Whether you're writing dark romance, thriller, fantasy, science fiction, romance, or psychological fiction, I'll help identify what's working, what's missing, and how to elevate your manuscript while preserving your unique voice.
This is more than basic proofreading. I focus on the core of your story improving pacing, strengthening tension, refining dialogue, deepening character arcs, and making sure every chapter keeps readers engaged from beginning to end.
What you'll receive includes a fully annotated manuscript, detailed editorial feedback, plot and pacing recommendations, character development notes, and honest constructive guidance designed to help your story reach its full potential.
Order now and lets transform your manuscript into a powerful story readers wont forget.
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FAQ
What types of editing do you provide?
I provide developmental editing, line editing, beta reading, copy editing, proofreading, and full manuscript critiques focused on improving story structure, pacing, character development, and emotional impact.
What genres do you specialize in?
I specialize in dark romance, romance, thriller, psychological thriller, fantasy, dark fantasy, mystery, dystopian fiction, paranormal romance, science fiction, and memoirs.
Will you change my writing style or voice?
No. My goal is to strengthen your manuscript while preserving your unique voice, tone, and storytelling style.
: What will I receive after editing?
You’ll receive an annotated manuscript with detailed comments, constructive feedback, story improvement suggestions, and a professional editorial report.
Can you help first-time authors?
Absolutely. I work with both first-time and experienced authors and provide clear, supportive, and actionable feedback throughout the editing process.
Do you edit unfinished manuscripts?
Yes. I can review completed manuscripts, partial drafts, or works in progress depending on your needs.
