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I will give feedback, notes, analysis, script coverage for film script or screenplay
UCLA Trained Screenwriter and Story Consultant
I'm James, a UCLA-trained screenwriter with expertise in feature films, series, short films, commercials, branded content. I craft compelling scripts, characters, dialogue, treatments, loglines, scrip...
About this Gig
WELCOME TO MY GIG!
Professional Script Coverage for TV Pilots & Screenplays
A strong screenplay requires more than a great idea; it needs structure, clarity, compelling characters, and a story that keeps readers engaged from beginning to end. If you're seeking professional, industry-style feedback on your TV pilot, feature screenplay, or short film script, I provide comprehensive script coverage designed to help you identify strengths, uncover weaknesses, and elevate your writing.
Each script is reviewed with a critical yet constructive approach, delivering clear, actionable notes that focus on both creative and commercial viability. My coverage is tailored to your project's goals and intended audience, ensuring feedback that is relevant, insightful, and practical.
Coverage Includes:
- Logline Evaluation
- Synopsis Assessment
- Plot & Story Structure Analysis
- Character Development Review
- Dialogue & Voice Assessment
- Pacing & Scene Effectiveness
My objective is to provide honest, objective, and solution-oriented feedback that helps writer make informed revisions and strengthen their scripts with confidence.
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English
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German
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Other Scriptwriting Services I Offer
FAQ
What types of scripts do you review?
I provide script coverage for TV pilots, feature film screenplays, short films, web series, and episodic television scripts across all genres.
Will you rewrite my script?
No. This service focuses on analysis and constructive feedback. I provide actionable notes and suggestions, but I do not rewrite or edit the screenplay itself unless requested as a separate service.
How detailed is the feedback?
Feedback is comprehensive, specific, and tailored to your script. You'll receive professional insights that identify strengths, weaknesses, and opportunities for revision.
Do you work with first-time writers?
Absolutely. Whether you're a beginner or an experienced screenwriter, the feedback is adapted to your level and creative goals.
Can you review unfinished scripts?
Yes. I can provide feedback on completed drafts, partial drafts, treatments, outlines, and TV pilot concepts.
