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I will beta read ya or na fantasy novel with actionable feedback
Naomi Vonnegut Born in the industry dedicated to your story success
Hi, I’m Naomi Vonnegut. Growing up as the daughter of a successful author, I didn't just learn to read stories; I learned how to build them. I spent years behind the scenes helping my father edit, ref...
About this Gig
You've poured your soul into this manuscript. Now it needs the one thing you can't give it yourself, which is, the fresh, expert eyes of a professional beta reader.
You need a sharp beta reader who will read your story closely and tell you exactly what's working and what's quietly killing it.
Why me?
I am Naomi Vonnegut. Raised in the world of publishing, I spent years helping my father refine his successful novels. That experience sharpened my ability to spot what keeps readers emotionally invested and what causes their interest to fade.
What I dig into:
- Does your opening hook grab and refuse to let go?
- Is your narrative voice consistent, or does it drift?
- Do your characters feel like real people, or not?
- Where does your pacing drag?
- Does your dialogue move the story, or just fill space?
- Where are the plot holes your reader will fall into? And any areas needed to dig into to improve your story.
What you get
- Detailed in-line comments directly on your manuscript
- A professional reader report with clear, constructive feedback
- Honest insights from a dedicated beta reader focused on improving your story
Message me today. Let's turn your draft into a novel that
Language:
English
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French
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What genres do you read?
I beta read across many genres, but specialize on romantasy, YA, dark romance, psychological thrillers, and mixed genre works.
Do you correct grammar and spelling?
This gig focuses on beta reading (feedback), not proofreading or editing. I will flag major clarity issues but won’t fix grammar unless you add a proofreading extra.
Will you read a first draft?
Yes, I can read first drafts — but for the most useful feedback, it’s best if you’ve already completed at least one self-edit.
What file format should I send?
Please send a Word document (.doc or .docx) or a Google Docs link so feedback can be added directly.
Do you use AI or third parties?
No. All manuscripts are read personally by me, from start to finish and with a personal feedback. No AI or third parties at all.
