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I will alpha read your romantasy manuscript to strengthen plot and characters
Trusted Alpha Reader Helping Authors Improve Their Stories
Welcome, My name is Ogunniran James, Passionate Alpha & Beta Reader helping authors improve plot, pacing, character development, dialogue, and reader engagement through honest and constructive feedbac...
About this Gig
YOUR MANUSCRIPT DESERVES FEEDBACK THAT HELPS IT GROW STRONGER
I will alpha read your romantasy manuscript and provide clear, honest, reader-focused feedback on plot and character development so you can understand exactly how your story works from a real readers perspective.
This service helps you identify what is working, what feels unclear, and what needs strengthening before you move toward publishing.
You will receive feedback on:
- Opening hook and story impact
- Character depth and emotional connection
- Plot clarity, conflict, and stakes
- Pacing and story flow
- Dialogue and character voice
- Worldbuilding in romantasy elements
- Structure, chapter flow, and ending payoff
- Strengths, weaknesses, and actionable suggestions
Outcome: a stronger, more engaging romantasy manuscript that feels polished, immersive, and ready for readers, agents, or editors.
Best for romantasy, romance, fantasy, dark romance, and fantasy romance writers. Please message me before ordering.
Send me your manuscript and lets strengthen your story together.
Language:
English
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Spanish
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What exactly is alpha reading?
Alpha reading is early-stage manuscript feedback focused on big-picture storytelling. I review your plot, characters, pacing, and emotional impact to show how your story reads before publication.
What will I receive after your feedback?
You will receive a detailed reader report covering strengths, weaknesses, and actionable suggestions on plot, character development, pacing, and overall story engagement.
Do you edit or proofread my manuscript?
No. This service focuses on alpha reading and story feedback only. I do not correct grammar, spelling, or line edits unless stated in your package.
What genres do you specialize in?
I specialize in romantasy, romance, fantasy, dark romance, and fantasy romance manuscripts.
How do I send my manuscript?
You can upload your manuscript in DOCX or PDF format after placing your order. Please ensure it is the latest version of your draft.
