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I will audit your cold email and boost reply rates
About this Gig
GETTING LESS THAN 5% REPLIES TO YOUR COLD EMAILS?
I'll review your B2B cold email and show you exactly why it isn't converting - with tailored advice for your specific industry.
Using a 25-point framework, I'll score your email and provide industry-specific improvements.
WHAT YOU GET:
- Professional audit with 25-point scorecard
- Industry-tailored feedback on personalization, clarity, CTA, length, and tone
- Prioritized fixes specific to your market
- Clean PDF report
WHY TRUST ME:
20+ years B2B sales across agriculture, industrial, corporate, tech, and professional services.
Managed campaigns to 19,000+ prospects across different sectors. I know what works in tech vs manufacturing vs services.
You get industry-specific advice, not generic tips.
FOR:
Sales teams, founders, marketers, anyone with low reply rates.
RESULTS:
"Fail" emails: 2% replies
"Gold Standard" emails: 8-15% replies
The difference is 3-4 industry-tailored changes. Let's fix yours.
Language:
English
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What if I don't have a cold email yet?
This service is for assessing existing emails. If you need an email written from scratch, check out my other gig for email writing services. However, if you have a rough draft or outline, I can work with that.
Will you rewrite my email?
This service provides scoring and recommendations only. For full rewrites, see my "Email Rewrite" gig. However, the Premium package includes rewrite suggestions that you can implement yourself.
How quickly can you deliver?
Standard delivery is 24-48 hours. I'm based in South Africa (UTC+2 / SAST) and typically deliver within one business day. Need it faster? Message me for rush delivery options
What are your working hours / when will you respond?
I'm based in South Africa (SAST / UTC+2). I respond to messages within 1 hour during business hours (8 AM - 6 PM SAST, Monday-Friday). Orders are processed 7 days a week for fastest delivery.
What if I disagree with your score?
I provide detailed explanations for each score based on proven B2B email principles tested across 12,000+ real campaigns. If something's unclear, I'm happy to discuss. Standard and Premium packages include revisions so we can refine together.
Can you score follow-up emails too?
Yes! The same 25-point framework applies to follow-up emails. Just specify it's a follow-up email when ordering, and I'll assess it with follow-up best practices in mind.
Do you assess emails in languages other than English?
Currently I only score English-language emails to ensure accuracy. However, I can assess emails targeting African markets with African English variants and provide region-specific recommendations.
Can you help with emails targeting African markets specifically?
Absolutely! I've worked across 11 African countries for 20 years (South Africa, Zimbabwe, Zambia, Botswana, Mozambique, Namibia, Kenya, Ethiopia, Cameroon, Nigeria). I understand SADC business culture and can provide African market-specific insights that Western copywriters cannot.
What time zone are you in and when do you work?
I'm in South Africa (SAST = UTC+2). Business hours: 8 AM - 6 PM SAST (Mon-Fri), which is 1 AM - 11 AM EST or 6 AM - 4 PM GMT. I process orders 7 days a week and respond to messages within 1 hour during business hours.
