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I will rewrite your cold email to get more replies
About this Gig
TURN YOUR COLD EMAIL INTO REPLIES
Most B2B cold emails fail because they break basic conversion principles. I'll rewrite yours using proven frameworks targeting 20+/25 on professional conversion criteria.
WHAT YOU GET:
- Professional cold email rewrite (targeting 20+/25 score)
- 2 optimized subject lines
- Mobile-friendly (75-125 words)
- Low-friction CTA designed for replies
- Before/after comparison
- Copy-paste ready
MY METHOD:
I improve 5 conversion factors:
- Personalization (specific, not generic)
- Clarity (value clear in 5 seconds)
- CTA strength (yes/no questions, not meetings)
- Length (mobile-optimized)
- Tone (peer-to-peer, not salesy) Each targeting 4-5/5 for 20+/25 total.
WHY TRUST ME:
20 years B2B sales. Managed campaigns to 12,000+ contacts. Sent 19,000+ real emails across agriculture, industrial, and corporate sectors. I know what drives replies.
RESULTS:
Typical emails: 2-5% reply rates Framework rewrites: 10-15%+ replies Target: 20+/25 conversion score
PERFECT FOR:
Sales teams, founders, marketers, anyone wanting more conversations from cold outreach.
Let's turn your email into something people actually reply to.
Language:
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What if I don't have an email yet, just an idea?
That's fine! I can write from scratch. Just provide the details in the requirements: target audience, your product/service, and your goal.
How do you guarantee 20+/25 score?
I use a systematic framework and score every email before delivery. If it doesn't hit 20+, I revise until it does. This is included in all packages.
Can you write follow-up emails too?
Yes! Premium package includes a follow-up template. For dedicated follow-up sequences, see my "Email Sequence" gig.
Will this work for my industry?
Standard and Premium packages include revisions. I'll adjust until you're happy with the result. My goal is emails that actually get replies.
How quickly can you deliver?
Standard delivery is 48 hours. Need it faster? Message me for rush delivery options (usually available for +$10).
What are your working hours / when will you respond?
I'm based in South Africa (SAST / UTC+2). I respond to messages within 1 hour during business hours (8 AM - 6 PM SAST, Monday-Friday). Orders processed 7 days a week.
Can you help with emails targeting specific markets?
Yes! I have 20 years experience across multiple markets and can tailor tone, style, and approach to your target audience, whether B2B tech, industrial, services, or other sectors.
What information do I need to provide for tailored approaches?
I need: target audience details (role, company size, industry), product/service description, campaign goal, current email draft (if available), and key results/metrics to include. This allows me to tailor personalization, problem framing, proof points, and CTA to their specific market & objectives.
