I will critique and beta read your short story or novel chapter
Critical reading with a writer's perspective
About this Gig
I will provide detailed and constructive feedback on a short story or novel chapter, focusing on plot, pacing, characterization, dialogue, structure, clarity, worldbuilding and reader engagement.
Success stories from online writing workshops:
- "James identified one of the core weaknesses of my writing while critiquing it, and that feedback has been invaluable in improving it since. I highly recommend their services!" (Fallon)
- "I have found how James is able to fall in love, despite pointing out the flaws within my writing to be a source of not inspiration, but a continued trust in their profession. Absolutely recommend for others to come to them for their services." (Anon)
- "James has helped point out the flaws of my plot and clarity in my writing; how to help create more impactful descriptions in my literary work, which is a genre with a lot of purple prose, but when to pull back and select the imagery I want to be the strongest without losing the actual essence. I am big into power words that present the emotional impact based also on phonics, but they have pointed out where that has gone astray from what I am trying for the emotional flow." (Lily Paige)
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do you use AI?
No, I never generate, rework, or feed any of my critiques or client's submissions into AI.
What is your method for critiquing?
There are three stages to the way I critique: 1. Initial: what I think as a non-critical reader. 2. Developing: what I think as a critical reader. 3. Final: what I think as a writer.
Can I request specific focus areas?
Of course! I will provide answers to your questions in addition to the reader's report.
What file formats do you accept?
I only accept Google Docs, Ellipsus, and Microsoft Word invite links. Feel free to message me if you need help navigating either applications!
Do you do line and copy editing?
Yes, I do! They're included in every package, free of charge.
Can I message you before ordering?
Of course! There's nothing more vulnerable than sharing your writing. Let's see if we're a good fit first!
