I will critique and beta read your short story or novel chapter

China

I speak English

Critical reading with a writer's perspective

Hi, I’m James! I am an aspiring editor and creative writer with several years of experience in online writing workshops and reviewing fiction from writers with different styles, backgrounds and levels...
About this Gig

I will provide detailed and constructive feedback on a short story or novel chapter, focusing on plot, pacing, characterization, dialogue, structure, clarity, worldbuilding and reader engagement.


Success stories from online writing workshops:

  • "James identified one of the core weaknesses of my writing while critiquing it, and that feedback has been invaluable in improving it since. I highly recommend their services!" (Fallon)
  • "I have found how James is able to fall in love, despite pointing out the flaws within my writing to be a source of not inspiration, but a continued trust in their profession. Absolutely recommend for others to come to them for their services." (Anon)
  • "James has helped point out the flaws of my plot and clarity in my writing; how to help create more impactful descriptions in my literary work, which is a genre with a lot of purple prose, but when to pull back and select the imagery I want to be the strongest without losing the actual essence. I am big into power words that present the emotional impact based also on phonics, but they have pointed out where that has gone astray from what I am trying for the emotional flow." (Lily Paige)

Genre:

Action

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Adventure

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Fanfiction

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Literary fiction

Language:

English

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