I will revise, proofread and analyze your script

As a script reader for multiple film festivals and creative projects, I evaluate much more than grammar and formatting.

When reviewing your screenplay, I'll analyze the same elements that festival readers and development teams look for:

• Is the tone clear and consistent?
• What emotions is the script trying to create, and does it achieve them?
• Are the characters believable, compelling, and well-developed?
• Do their actions and motivations make sense?
• Are there moments where a character becomes unlikable or inconsistent?
• Are there plot points, details, or story elements that don't make sense?
• Are there unanswered questions that confuse the reader?
• Are there scenes or details that should be expanded, clarified, or removed?

In addition to proofreading for grammar, spelling, and continuity, I'll provide honest, constructive feedback to help strengthen your story, characters, and overall impact before you submit your script.