I will provide developmental editing for your novel or manuscript

United States

I speak English

Developmental Editor

I’m an author and developmental editor who helps writers turn promising drafts into stronger, more compelling stories. I focus on plot structure, pacing, character arcs, motivation, continuity, tensio...

About this Gig

I provide developmental editing for fiction manuscripts, with a focus on helping authors strengthen the story beneath the words. I review plot structure, pacing, character arcs, motivation, continuity, scene effectiveness, tension, clue and reveal progression, and overall reader engagement.

My feedback is detailed, practical, and designed to help you revise with purpose. I identify plot holes, weak transitions, timeline issues, repetitive scenes, dropped story threads, unclear motivations, and areas where the story loses momentum.

Depending on your package, you may receive an editorial report, annotated manuscript, continuity notes, character and plot analysis, revision priorities, and series development feedback.

I do not rewrite your story into my voice. My goal is to understand what you are trying to achieve and help you build the strongest version of your manuscript while preserving your style and creative vision.