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I will thriller and mystery novel editor for pacing and character development and plot
Your Reliable and Affordable Beta reader, Alpha reader, Proofreader and Editor
Hi, I’m Jesse, a professional beta reader and manuscript reviewer passionate about helping authors improve their stories. I specialize in Romance, Fantasy, Dark Romance, YA, Thriller, Horror, Mystery,...
About this Gig
Is your thriller, crime, or mystery novel struggling with weak pacing, flat characters, confusing plot twists, or story inconsistencies?
You're in the right place.
(I do not use AI-generated editing. Every manuscript is reviewed manually with attention to detail, suspense structure, emotional impact, and reader experience.)
I help authors strengthen pacing, improve character development, fix plot holes, tighten suspense, and enhance overall reader engagement while preserving your unique writing voice.
Whether you're writing a crime thriller, mystery novel, detective story, psychological thriller, suspense fiction, or dark mystery manuscript, I provide detailed developmental editing, line editing, manuscript critique, and story feedback designed to make your book more gripping, immersive, and publication-ready.
My goal is to help transform your thriller or mystery manuscript into a polished, compelling, and page-turning story readers wont forget.
WHAT I WILL HELP YOU FIX:
- Weak pacing and slow story sections
- Flat or unrealistic characters
- Plot holes and timeline inconsistencies
- Weak suspense and tension buildup
Message me today or place your order now.
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What genres do you edit?
I specialize in Thriller, Crime, Mystery, Psychological Thriller, Detective Fiction, Suspense, Dark Fiction, and Crime Drama manuscripts.
What type of editing do you provide?
I provide developmental editing, manuscript critique, pacing analysis, plot fixing, character development feedback, line editing suggestions, and readability improvement.
I’m a first-time author. Can you help me?
Absolutely. Many of my clients are first-time authors. I provide supportive, clear feedback so you feel confident in every stage of the process.
Do you work with unfinished manuscripts?
Yes. I can work with early drafts, partial manuscripts, or completed novels. I help identify gaps in structure, pacing issues, and areas that need development.
Will you fix plot holes and pacing issues?
Yes. I carefully review story structure, pacing, suspense, timelines, clues, twists, and inconsistencies to strengthen your manuscript.
Do you use AI for editing?
No. All editing and manuscript feedback are completed manually to ensure detailed, accurate, and personalized editorial support.
