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I will beta read noir, gothic, psychological, domestic suspense

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English

87 orders completed

Stylistic Line Editor and Experienced Beta Reader

I screen submissions for a reputable literary journal that publishes high-quality genre fiction, literary-genre blends, novel excerpts, flash fiction and contest finalists and have seven years' experi...

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Jessica H has an exceptional number of repeat buyers

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About this Gig

Is your subtext doing the lifting or are mechanical plot points crowding out the suspense? Is the dread earned between the lines or are your reveals too overtly forecasted? Is your reader actively calculating the threat or is the mystery laid out too literally on the page? Let's ensure your micro-tension is fully calibrated and your narrative execution carries the psychological depth and visceral grip your readers crave. Whether you've written a gritty procedural, a dynamic thriller, a slow-burn psychological suspense or a literary mystery rich with subtext and metaphor, I'll offer collaborative-style feedback from a reader's and a writer's perspective, highlighting what's effective and identifying opportunities for refinement. I tailor my feedback to the specific sub-genre - clue planting for whodunits; interiority and atmospheric density for southern gothic; dialogue and voice for hard-boiled; moral ambiguity and narrative payoff for noir; emotional calibration and intrigue for domestic or romantic suspense. Actionable feedback is provided via in-line comments and a report: foreshadowing, friction, psychological and plot plausibility, narrative velocity, and reader expectations.

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

Literary fiction

Mystery

Language:

English

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69 reviews for this Gig
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    nicw2019

    Repeat Client

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Working with Jessica again on my third psychological thriller has exceeded my expectations again but I say this each time I work with Jessica. The minute I finish a manuscript, Jessica is the first person I reach out to to read before I heavily edit, simply because I trust her professionalism, her insights...

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

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    thrillerauthor1

    US

    United States

    5

    Jessica was a dream come true. She was a beta reader for my psychological thriller novel and gave me incredible helpful notes, truly going above and beyond my expectations. Both her overview letter breaking down each element of the story and responding to it as well as her notes within the manuscript...

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

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    robert_saba

    US

    United States

    5

    I was drawn to Jessica for beta reading and editing of my novel because of her professional background and many positive reviews on Fiverr. After receiving her perceptive insights and edits, I can only second what so many others have said about her detailed attention to the text, her understanding of...

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • N
    image-docs

    nicw2019

    Repeat Client

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Working with Jessica has been, once again, a wonderful experience. I cannot imagine working with anyone else now when I have a manuscript that needs an in-depth review. I write psychological thriller and Jessica's knowledge and grasp of what is required to deliver the reader a propulsive read is beyond...

    $100-$200

    Price

    9 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C

    coffee_spoons

    US

    United States

    5

    Absolutely excellent! This is the second time that I have used Jessica to beta read. Her insights on my first manuscript helped me get my now agent who sold that book in a significant two-book deal. This beta read was for the second book, and she absolutely delivered. Her insights are sharp, actionable,...

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

69 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(69)
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Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
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Most relevant
  • N
    image-docs

    nicw2019

    Repeat Client

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Working with Jessica again on my third psychological thriller has exceeded my expectations again but I say this each time I work with Jessica. The minute I finish a manuscript, Jessica is the first person I reach out to to read before I heavily edit, simply because I trust her professionalism, her insights...

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T

    thrillerauthor1

    US

    United States

    5

    Jessica was a dream come true. She was a beta reader for my psychological thriller novel and gave me incredible helpful notes, truly going above and beyond my expectations. Both her overview letter breaking down each element of the story and responding to it as well as her notes within the manuscript...

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • R
    image-docs

    robert_saba

    US

    United States

    5

    I was drawn to Jessica for beta reading and editing of my novel because of her professional background and many positive reviews on Fiverr. After receiving her perceptive insights and edits, I can only second what so many others have said about her detailed attention to the text, her understanding of...

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • N
    image-docs

    nicw2019

    Repeat Client

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Working with Jessica has been, once again, a wonderful experience. I cannot imagine working with anyone else now when I have a manuscript that needs an in-depth review. I write psychological thriller and Jessica's knowledge and grasp of what is required to deliver the reader a propulsive read is beyond...

    $100-$200

    Price

    9 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C

    coffee_spoons

    US

    United States

    5

    Absolutely excellent! This is the second time that I have used Jessica to beta read. Her insights on my first manuscript helped me get my now agent who sold that book in a significant two-book deal. This beta read was for the second book, and she absolutely delivered. Her insights are sharp, actionable,...

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No