I will beta read your fantasy manuscript

I will read and provide honest, constructive feedback on your story and provide actionable next steps to improve it.

All packages include:

• A multi-page in-depth reader report detailing what works, what doesn't, and how your work may be strengthened
• Inline comments with my real-time reactions and thoughts to your story

Questions I will answer in my report:

• Did the opening pages grip me? If not, why?
• Are the tension and stakes adequately set up to create an engaging story?
• Is the dialogue realistic, entertaining, and distinct for each character?
• Were there any points in the story that were confusing?
• Did I notice any continuity issues?
• Was the pacing appropriate for the genre?
• Is there a good balance between interiority, description, and plot?

About me as your reader:

• I have no triggers and can read any complex or sensitive material.
• I enjoy a wide array of genres, but I generally read literary, romance, fantasy, and horror fiction.
• I will not be using AI in any aspect of my critique of your work.